I'll say this much, it's different. I didn't mind the change in perspective changes too much. I think it can work in a prologue sort of thing. Just don't keep doing it for every chapter, as it would get old fast.
Yeah, I would've posted the second chapter I wrote, but it's on a second computer. I ...
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- Tue Sep 02, 2014 4:10 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: War on Dreams ; Hisao/Suzu (W.I.P)
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- Tue Sep 02, 2014 2:34 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: War on Dreams ; Hisao/Suzu (W.I.P)
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Re: War on Dreams ; Hisao/Suzu (W.I.P)
Looking at this, I seem to have a problem with length.
Also it might be shit.
Also it might be shit.
- Tue Sep 02, 2014 2:28 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: War on Dreams ; Hisao/Suzu (W.I.P)
- Replies: 5
- Views: 3295
War on Dreams ; Hisao/Suzu (W.I.P)
To: Zephyr14@unix.com
Subject: S Job
It’s on.
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Raindrops pattered against a wide window, driven on by coastal winds. The view revealed by the paned glass would’ve been majestic, overlooking the bay near Kyoto, if the low-lying clouds hadn’t done their best in concealing it. Instead, it only made ...
Subject: S Job
It’s on.
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Raindrops pattered against a wide window, driven on by coastal winds. The view revealed by the paned glass would’ve been majestic, overlooking the bay near Kyoto, if the low-lying clouds hadn’t done their best in concealing it. Instead, it only made ...
- Thu Jul 24, 2014 6:54 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Random KS Discussion
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Re: Random KS Discussion
So a day ago I downloaded Katawa Shoujo for the first time. Played through normally, and got Hanako's good ending.
Afterwards though...
http://i.imgur.com/MYGUToD.gif <- Hisao
I mean, that was seriously the closest I've ever come to crying over media. The second I told my teamspeak buddies I ...
Afterwards though...
http://i.imgur.com/MYGUToD.gif <- Hisao
I mean, that was seriously the closest I've ever come to crying over media. The second I told my teamspeak buddies I ...