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Welcome to the forum! :D Gotta say, this had such a nice feeling while I was reading it. I just felt so relaxed :) You opened well, the way this is set up you've got tons of room to expand story wise. I can honestly just see all the possible possibilities! Otherwise, there was a few instances where ...

Somehow I missed Tuesday's update, so here is the commentary for both: Hello Mirage :D Long time no see! What you got for me today? I don't think running blades are something every amputee gets in addition to a regular prosthetic. Hmm... Maybe. Although I don't think we can rule that out completely...

I was supposed to have this out by F-Friday... Anyway! It's a little short but here ya go :D Act 2 Chapter Four- Romance Recon Part 2 ============================================================= Aisle upon aisle of books, the sunlight pouring through the nearby windows, the hardwood desk and chair...

*Warning* For anyone who finds slightly suggestive things unsettling, be sure to skip the first segment in this chapter :) Act 2 Chapter Four- Romance Recon Part 1 ============================================================= "Ah... What a relief." Turning the handle has produced the desi...

Act 2 Chapter Three- Night amongst Neon ============================================================= ... Has that car passed us by before? Now that I think about it, I think I've lost my ability to tell the difference. And what about those lights over there... Have they always loo- No, alright, I'...

Just a little update for you guys. I'm off on holiday this coming week, now I'll probably spend my downtime writing. I might even finish the next chapter but I won't be near a computer in time for Friday... So I'll post it when I get back :) Thank you for reading this story everyone, I'll be sure to...

Act 2 Chapter Two- Fun Delayed ============================================================= "And this is...?" Mr. Okada scans the classroom for anyone willing to answer, his expectations clearly won't be met as most students try to focus entirely on their textbooks. I can already feel hi...

When I "played" Snakes and Ladders as a kid at some point I always wished that someone - anyone - would finally win, so we could do something fun afterwards. That's never a good sign for a game... Keep in mind everyone, don't bring a game of Snakes and Ladders near Mirage unless you want ...

The VN stated that it took Emi about a year and even that was considered very fast... I wouldn't use Emi as reference if I was you... And anyway, Emi started pretty soon after her accident. You can't just assume that this other girl did so as well. Now this is WAY too optimistic. Hmm... It seems th...

Act 2 Chapter One- Assessment Part 2 ============================================================= ... "Susu, what are you doing here?" ... Now how am I going to explain this without sounding like a complete creep? Obviously I should just tell her that I was wandering around the grounds a...

I don't remember - did you give a reason why he is so afraid of prosthetics yet? Nope. :) Try to put dialogue by the same character in the same paragraph. I had to read this thrice to figure out who was saying what and I'm still only half certain I got it right: "Sheesh. Well..." Takashi ...

Alright here's the next chapter, this one's a two part-er. *Edit* Fixed it up a little, hopefully will be less weird to read. Act 2 Chapter One- Assessment Part 1 ============================================================= The pills... They worked all right... ... ... N-No, relying on them in the ...

CRAWLING IN MY SKIN, THESE WORDS, TH- In all seriousness though, I'm super happy to find out that someone's writing a Hana bad end epilogue :) And from Hisao's perspective no less! I haven't seen a lot of those. Hisao x Hanako was once my favorite pair, not anymore but I still like them <3 Anyway a...

Character Bio's have been updated! Anxiety problems and family issues have been wrestling with me this past week and just to add fuel to the fire, I've been in a bit of a creative funk... I apologise for saying that I would update last week and then not doing it... :( In order to get myself going a...

Hello everyone. Unfortunately, there is going to be a slight delay in the release of the next chapter. It will be out sometime this weekend, so keep an eye out! So long for now and thank you to everyone who took the time to read this ongoing story :) Edit: At the part where he was writing about his ...