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- Mon Apr 16, 2018 6:47 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
- Replies: 175
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Act 3, Chapter 5 - A Painful Request
((And after entirely too long, we're back with 3-5! 3-6 and 3-7 will probably follow pretty shortly after. Act 4 will probably take longer - I'm replaying a few parts of the game for "research" and will need to finish that before I can write. All told, though? We're in the home stretch, folks. Once ...
- Sat Mar 31, 2018 8:55 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
- Replies: 175
- Views: 103384
Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 3/27!)
So I made a quick update to tell everyone that I wouldn't be disappearing for another year...and I promptly disappeared for another year. Time scares me sometimes. :( This story will be updated soon. 3-6 and 3-7 are pretty much done, and I'm fighting 3-5 which was what was giving me trouble a year ...
- Mon Apr 17, 2017 10:23 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Name Withheld For Spoilers
- Replies: 19
- Views: 12909
Re: Name Withheld For Spoilers
Quick update, so everyone knows I'm not disappearing for another year. ;) Posted this in Hindsight already, but it equally applies here. I'm in the midst of the final stretch of business school right now, which will keep me in its icy grip until the first week of May or so. The chapter I'm working ...
- Mon Apr 17, 2017 10:21 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
- Replies: 175
- Views: 103384
Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 3/27!)
Quick update, so everyone knows I'm not disappearing for another year. ;) I'm in the midst of the final stretch of business school right now, which will keep me in its icy grip until the first week of May or so. This is why I wanted to ideally finish Act III before the beginning of April, but ...
- Wed Mar 29, 2017 5:24 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Name Withheld For Spoilers
- Replies: 19
- Views: 12909
Re: Name Withheld For Spoilers
First off, thanks for all the feedback. It's very much appreciated. As a reward for reading this, here, have the title reveal, in spoilers, of course: One True Pairing This is, and always was going to be, the hardest to write/least satisfying chapter in this piece for a thousand reasons that most of ...
- Mon Mar 27, 2017 10:24 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
- Replies: 175
- Views: 103384
Act 3, Chapter 4 - Late Night at Yamaku
Here's 3-4, I'll consolidate comments before this into the next batch. Cheers! ------ Time is an amazing thing - crawling when I don’t want it to, and racing breakneck around the final turn for home when I’d like to stop and smell the roses. A huge pile of built-up work sits on my desk at home, th ...
- Sun Mar 26, 2017 6:56 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Name Withheld For Spoilers
- Replies: 19
- Views: 12909
Now This Is A Story All About How...
The nurse’s office is far, far too ordinary a scene for this conversation, I decide, as I stare openmouthed at Yamaku Academy’s head nurse. We are about to have a discussion, it seems, about why I remember falling to my presumptive death off of the Academy roof, yet am still here reliving my first da ...
- Sun Mar 26, 2017 5:43 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Name Withheld For Spoilers
- Replies: 19
- Views: 12909
Re: Name Withheld For Spoilers
Thank you all for the thoughts so far. I tend to like to reply to comments, and will do so throughout. Interactivity is fun! Next chapter will be up tonight, after which I'm going to attempt to make the table of contents for this thing using copious amounts of spoiler tags and lots of warnings ...
- Fri Mar 24, 2017 9:40 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Name Withheld For Spoilers
- Replies: 19
- Views: 12909
Welcome to Yamaku Academy
There’s something...unpleasant about this gate. Most gates look pompous, but this one seems especially so - as if it belongs to a country club or some evil millionaire’s lair. As I think that, I realize that I’ve probably read too many books in the hospital - this isn’t a gate to a club or a lair, it ...
- Fri Mar 24, 2017 9:38 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Name Withheld For Spoilers
- Replies: 19
- Views: 12909
Name Withheld For Spoilers
Hi, this is Puncyclopedia! You might know me from such fanfiction as The Benefit of Hindsight, in which I try to rehabilitate the much-maligned reputation of one Lilly Satou, and The Ties That Bind, an unfinished Shizune x Hisao one-shot that I totally forgot existed until I started writing this ...
- Fri Mar 24, 2017 9:21 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
- Replies: 175
- Views: 103384
Act 3, Chapter 3 - Eagerly Awaited
Here’s 3-3, after longer than I would like. I’m more nervous about this than anything else I’ve posted here. As promised, this chapter contains an H-scene. Should you be vehemently opposed to such things, I recommend that you stop reading at the phrase “...let’s resume where we left off, shall we, Hi ...
- Thu Mar 23, 2017 12:56 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
- Replies: 175
- Views: 103384
Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 3/20!)
3-3 probably up tomorrow - I'm working on some final tweaks and edits. The good news is I've been busy working on other parts of the story (conveniently, ones I can write during downtime between classes without feeling super self-conscious...) aaaaaand even the start of something new that I hope to ...
- Tue Mar 21, 2017 2:29 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
- Replies: 175
- Views: 103384
Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 3/20!)
Good update. I only recently started reading this and I really like it. Welcome aboard, and thank you! Well, that came quickly. We're getting close, ladies and gents, to the BIG MOMENT Writing H-scenes is waaay harder than writing the rest of the piece. Hoping not to disappoint! @Mirage - Thank you ...
- Mon Mar 20, 2017 7:18 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
- Replies: 175
- Views: 103384
Act 3, Chapter 2 - Driven to Distraction
Monday is crawling . Lilly and I have different lunchtimes, so we don’t get to see each other during the day. It’s just as well - given how badly my hormones are running amok, the result might not be appropriate for school. It feels like I’ve devolved into a teenager - with all of the emotions that i ...
- Mon Mar 20, 2017 6:24 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
- Replies: 175
- Views: 103384
Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 3/16!)
Hisao/Lilly is more complicated still because she's technically his mentor - and is likely to write him a glowing review for entirely legitimate reasons that might be considered less legitimate if people knew they were dating. Okay, that might indeed be a problem - or at least an inconvenience. I ...