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Why would all the information be in her medical file in a hospital in Japan?

Hm, you're right, good point. I'm going to take a minute to rephrase the whole thing. Thank you!

EDIT: Everything is fixed, i took the time to add new information too, thanks again for the heads up.

Is that something that google translate created? Because it seems way too formal for normal conversation. Also, I'm not 100% certain, but I'd use に instead of を there. Indeed it is, thank you for pointing that out! Fixed! What? They left that in when she woke up? Fixed, added a reason why they coul...

Act Zero - The World As We Know It (part 2) I wake up from a bad dream; feeling relieved that it's finally over and that I am awake. I cannot remember all of it, but I assume that is for the best. I think about how my day is going to be, going to school, talking to my friends, maybe going out with ...

There's a LOT of missed capitalization you might want to go back and fix. Fixed! Also, ditch the character bio. If it's important it should be included in the main story. If it's not important, we don't need to know it anyway. Good point. I ditched her backstory, But i'm gonna let her stats stay ju...

Thank you, Numb. I really appreciate your thoughts! :wink: I'm doing my best here to make chapter 2 a better text to read than chapter 1, in every way possible. Until then, i hope you guys have fun. P.S: I'll probably be done with it tomorrow. It'll be three times longer than the previous chapter, E...

And while you're at it, you can make her Japanese - except if you want to make her insufficient language skills a plot point... Are you a mind reader? :lol: Actually, she does have a moderate amount of practice in the Japanese language. I won't give any spoilers, so you'll have to wait and see! ......

Hey there Cook, you caught me slightly off guard while I am writing part 2! :lol: I have not thought about that, naming my username after my character, perhaps i was just excited to write so much that i did not give any attention to my user details. I would gladly edit my settings if there is anyway...

EDIT: Everything was fixed! Thank you Mirage! Anyway, as you said, she's gonna have problems while walking at first, and probably gonna need some crutches. She's not a master at Japanese, but she does manage to understand and speak a bit; thanks to the lessons she had at school, and because of her a...

Thanks for everything, Mournful! i'm feeling kinda embarrassed right now... in a good way. It's alright for anyone to make mistakes on their first try, and i appreciate your thoughts! The next chapter will be much better thanks to your notes, but anyway, taking everything wrong aside, how's the stor...

Act Zero - The World As We Know It (part 1) I hear the loud sound of my school's bell ringing, and just like it began not a few hours ago, today's class ended smoothly. I wouldn't say that it was ''smooth'' because I'm smart, but because today I was caught trying to skip class in the gardens, tryin...

Not sure if this is a dumb question or not, but what is her disability? Hey there Sea, she's not disabled in any way! she's mostly mentally scarred from the car accident, and after moving to Japan, her father got her to Yamaku to live a quiet life and to finish her studies after everything that hap...

Hello everyone! I'm kind of new in the writing department, and i'm not very good at english, so if i make any sort of typos or mistakes on my writing, feel free to give me your suggestions, criticism and correct my errors! anyway, i'm just going to start a new Fan Fic that i've been thinking about. ...