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And yes, I know how paragraphs are structured, you don't need to tell me. :roll: You just made it sound like a formula rather than "make it flow better". Ah, okay. Was it the "seven line breaks" thing? That was just meant to show that you didn't need to take more time if you dou...

No, not random. You put all the actions and lines of one person in one paragraph and when the speaking/acting person changes you hit enter twice instead of once and begin a new paragraph. Example: “What do you want to do today?” I ponder a few moments on my thoughts with a large grin on my face. “W...

Oh, so just select some random places and put make them into paragraphs? I'm not quite sure what the formula you're going with is. *does his best to refrain from cracking jokes about the education system in Texas :wink:* At the most basic level, paragraphs group together related thoughts, dialogue ...

Did you look at the example I provided? It has seven line breaks. Your original, single-spaced one had ten . Longer paragraphs (or, really, paragraphs ) help. No, where is your example?? In my first post. I added it after I posted, so you may have missed it. Sorry. Oh, so just select some random pl...

dewelar wrote:
Did you look at the example I provided? It has seven line breaks. Your original, single-spaced one had ten. Longer paragraphs (or, really, paragraphs) help.

No, where is your example??

If the second, to hell with that. You realize that you just said "the hell with making my story more readable", thus losing the interest of a good chunk of your potential readership (including me), right? But here's the thing, I don't have the time in my life to separate EVERY line in the...

I just spent the last hour looking for any BB codes that would double space, no such luck. Please, there's gotta be a way around this. :cry: :x Yes, you could spend an hour inserting lines between your paragraphs. It would be faster... Wait, you mean "inserting lines between your paragraphs&qu...

Ok, so here's the thing. How do I double space on here because I double spaced the Word document, then pasted it here and it didn't double space. I need to know because I'm sure as hell not gonna sit here and manually double space after I pasted the thing over. Also, I believe the immolation thing ...

Dad gives me a noogie and whispers to me. “You did good, son.” This bit really cracks me up. "You dun' gud there, ma boy." *Noogie* *Noogie* *Noogie* I'm looking forward to this story, but what's going on? Is this a time loop thread tale? If so... mind = blown! I just cracked up over that...

Okay, first of all, try to use double spacing to make your text more readable - especially when you use a time-skip as you do several times in this chapter! Then there is a HUGE difference between ordinary nightmares and Sleep Paralysis . Even for the latter I don't think there is any risk of cardi...

Endorphin Rush – An Emilougue Chapter 0 - “A New Constant” “What do you want to do today?” I ponder a few moments on my thoughts with a large grin on my face. “Well … I’ve met your parents now. I think it’s about time you meet mine. My mom would adore you!” “Can’t wait!” I stretch from the bed to g...

So we finally have an editor. CoffeeDrive is part of the team now. Next big post should be the official Chapter 0!!!! Stay tuned!

griffon8 wrote:

JohnnyTruant wrote:Yep, definitely on that 'will' boat now.

No, you were on the 'will' boat; that was the problem.

Oh, got you.

then my laptop decided to delete my save from Chapter 3 to the beginning. This is why there are two kinds of computer users: those who make regular backups, and those who will be. Losing a bunch of stuff is no fun. I lost about seven months of personal work once. Never got around to replacing a bun...

4/6/14 : I got to the fourth chapter, and then my laptop decided to delete my save from Chapter 3 to the beginning. So I'm taking a break until Monkey gets done with this artwork or I get more inspiration. School ends in about 7 weeks. I'll be working an 8 hr job but I'll have more time to concentr...