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According to some complex scientific analysis, Mishabro is a solid 5/10. Not sure what all these reactions are for, most people would be happy with that.


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While I appreciate more discussion on my works, I agree with the other posters sentiments. Not much point having two active threads discussing the same topic.

There's not too much differentiation between the two text colours, I don't want to change it either, if I do then I run into contrast issues. If you have good eyesight and a good monitor, then good for you, otherwise :lol:

Akira is standing outside and gives me a knowing look, one eyebrow cocked ...

Sea wrote:The Night Before Tomorrow

I am absolutely amazed that this is the first Yuri fic I've found of Hanako and Lilly. Not too much to say about it, well written and sweet. It seems a bit short, but that's the nature of 'shorts'.

I have discovered that whenever I sit down to write something, I will inevtiably write something else, case in point below. I didn't mean to write this, it just happened. Mostly a direct clone from Hanako's route, taken from the birthday party to the night out with Akira. I didn't like some of the ...

Haha I'm afraid my only knowledge of bombs comes from a single quote from TF2's Demoman
"One crossed wire, one wayward pinch of potassium chloride, one errand TWITCH..! And KABLEWIE!"

Never having played the game but I'll take a wild stab in the dark and say he said potassium nitrate instead ...

So is the idea of this book club to spotlight and have some conversation about older or abandoned fanfic's without resurrecting a thread or posting about the second chapter of Tomorrows Doom on page 48?

Not sure what you are trying to do here. The first post has almost no context, and the writing is quite dreamy. After reading it a few time's I'm guessing it's Emi written from the third person? But the way its written reads like Rin dialogue. I think the part with the conversation is between Rin ...

Suzu, not Suzi

Thanks, I thought I fixed all of those.

I feel like I should say something about the pace of the story

Right to do so, I'm not very good at writing things at a slow pace. Whenever I write reports for work I end up having everything in one concise page, then the boss complains ...

Here's the next part. In this part I balance the story on the top of its rocker while prodding the sides and hoping it doesn't fall off. The next few parts should be a bit less eventful and focus more on the character interactions. Enjoy!




Pt5

Shizune is dead. This presents a problem, I can't ...

You're kidding, right?
You're saying this masterpiece has a sequel?!
OH SWEET CHRIST IT'S LIKE CHRISTMAS

Sorry to disappoint but it was a joke :( Writing Taro dialogue is physically painful, I couldn't put myself through more of that.


Unless Hisao got a new classmate somewhere along the lines ...

Stop being a douche Hisao. He can pick one and hurt two of them,strain friendships. Drag the issue through the mud and hurt all of them, or chose none and remain friends with all. Maybe it's just me but I couldn't imagine spending day's pondering a rather clear cut issue. Does he value one lover or ...

What's the point of fiction if the plot isn't original?

A lot of the fiction on this site has the same plot line used again and again, just from different viewpoints and with different characters. It can be a different interpretation of events or a tribute to anothers work. Would you not watch a ...

Keep it up, enjoying these updates. She seems to be quite similarly constructed to Lilly, I prefer that to themocaw's extroverted interpretation.

Interesting, I can only vaguely remember that episode with the watch. Were you planning to do a direct parody of the plot or verge off and do your own thing?