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Well, it's been a few months since the last update, but if i hadn't been for that decidedly un-Japanese name, I wouldn't have recognized your character. He wasn't that much of an Emo-kid in the first chapters... I don't really see him as an "emo" kid, more of a rather fed up, depressed loser? Meds ...

Well, out of all the excuses I could throw out there for being fashionably late in the next update of this fanfic, I chose none. Hope the wait was worth it ...

Geez, you made Gage out to be quite the pessimist! I love it. LOL. Fix the few small things we have highlighted, and continue posting. The best way to improve is through trial and errors. :) Thanks so much for the help! I think I skipped by those errors, so I'm glad I can fix them now. My stomach ...

Yea, I was lookin' at you, baby. *Wink* Hah, if only... This shouldn't be there. That was my point. This one line made me fucking punch the wall in frustration. The rest of this is a great story. This one line doesn't match up with the rest of the story's tone. That's what I meant. Otherwise, like ...

Why would anyone with social anxiety's train of thought be written out like this? Sounds like you didn't even proofread for how the tone came out. This is all part of who Gage is, a person who doesn't like to be around people. Over time while being isolated, your thoughts may or may not be all that ...

Mirage_GSM wrote:The irony is painful...

*Takes a bow* Glad someone noticed.

*Insert new witty comment about the third installment here* Oh yea, today is Hanako's IRL birthday, so in honor of that, act two shall begin!!! 8) Sidenote: I think I'm just going to stick with the shortness of each entry, as it's relatively hard to write in great lengths about absolutely nothing ...

Really glad to see an update for this, as I like where this story is heading. 'Appreciate you continuing on with this, and not being overcome by the Miki Curse. I'm looking forward the your next installment!~

Alas, the second coming of Chri-I mean the second entry to my work of fiction. It indeed took way longer than it should to get this second part out, but the school year is ending and I will more than likely be writing at a more swift pace than before. "Why is it so short!?!?!?" Yolo. Well, I had ...

I really like seeing this slightly perverted side of Hanako, as it's a nice change from the usual thoughts in her head. I look forward to see more of her portrayed this way. Nice work.

EDIT: 25/02/14 So it's about 1 AM right now, but I had the sudden urge to edit and tidy(or at least attempt to) up my writing. I've hopefully fixed most of the grammatical and spelling mistakes I made, and fixed up a few tenses. All in all, I tried to make reading this more bearable, with the ...

To Acik: Thank you for the feedback, and I know, it is kinda a weird story, or at least in my opinion, and I'm pretty sure I'm going to have to rewrite and add wayyyyy more information on this route for it to even be noteworthy. I'm gonna work on all the things you noted, and will hopefully have ...

To bhtooefr: Sorry about the reply like this, still working on my foruming skillz :wink: Thanks a billion for the feedback, I'll fix the grammatical errors and I'll more likely than not come up with something or a back-story. As for the 'condition' the main character suffers, I couldn't really ...

So this is kinda my first attempt at writing a fanfiction. I've been a long time lurker on these forums, and have just recently created an account to share my opinions on matters. This story or whatever you want to call it is an ongoing route of its own, with only little interaction with the main ...