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If you continue to edit subsequent chapters to the opening post, you're very unlikely to get further feedback... Nobody is going to lynch you for replying to your own thread, especially if it's to add content. Ach holy pork. If I only knew how to split the stuff into chapters... Wot. I know now ...

U wot M8? No, don't get me wrong. The writing IS spectacular as f@ck. It's just the development of the story that befuddles me. It really is brain-reeling. first, almost a harem. then, the classical biblical "et in circulos suos regreditur", with Lilly's comeback etc. I am actualy dumb-struck with ...

Ambiguous. I loathe holidays, and I love your writing. Where do I run, to the ones who are pretty, or to the smart ones? Anyway, the X-Mas magic's in the air, and I may be dense, but some characters took a .. lessay, an unexpected turn in the pitch of their development. Really, Hanako as a gossip ...

You also have two small mistakes in your forum signature, and I have to wonder if you know exactly what it says. I just want to mention that Silentcook will, in fact, cook you if you get something wrong in Italian... First thing first, I feel pleased with your attention to my humble attempt in ...

AN: It's the very first time I write a fic. In general I want to know if I should go on, after all. Some foul language is plresent, be alert of it. Also, English's not my mother tongue. Comments, critiques, opinios, remarks etc. are welcome and encouraged. So, the first portion is hereby delivered ...