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by XIIHangman
Sat Jan 04, 2014 9:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Living (Rin Route)
Replies: 96
Views: 41548

Re: Living (Rin Route)

Normally I'm not a fan of OC stories but I really like your approach to how he interacted with all of the established characters. I'm also keen to the idea of using the unnamed silver haired guy in Class 3-3, i'm surprised that hasn't been used before. On the note of the Rin Route(does this imply we...
by XIIHangman
Sun Dec 29, 2013 9:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Natsume route--by Nubbles20 [12.29.13]
Replies: 18
Views: 11025

Re: A Natsume route--by Nubbles20 [12.29.13]

Ok,looking through the comments here I'd like to thank you all for the support, and criticism. But after reading it all and taking it into consideration, I'm faced with a few tough choices. The first would to be to "scrap" this, and rewrite it with Hisao rather than my OC, fix some of the...
by XIIHangman
Sun Dec 29, 2013 7:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Natsume route--by Nubbles20 [12.29.13]
Replies: 18
Views: 11025

Re: A Natsume route--by Nubbles20 [12.29.13]

First off, props to giving Natsume some focus, you don't often see anything pertaining to Natsume or Naomi without it being just a passing mention. I also like how you've written her and the OC's interactions in the few chapters you have out, though it leads into a pretty big flaw of the story so fa...