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This fic started cool and the main character was composed well but I really dont like how he got in love and became the standart hopeless depressed moron all of a sudden.

Also, last chapter was baffling, but im being too harsh. Hope you turn it around.

A Fanfic about Rika?

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Count me in.

Great chapter, though I fear Hanako might be getting a bit over the board with her paranoia. Still rooting for Lilly, though I know Iwanako will win with some sort of an insane twist of fate.

I think, with Emi, there is not much moving on, nothing unexpected. It's almolst allways the same. Hisao wants to get closer to her, she runs away. Over. And. Over. Again. It's not even two steps forward, one step back. Its one step forward, one backwards. While other characters progress and grow ...

Thing about Hisao is... Well, some games tend to make their main character as uninteresting and average as they can, so the audience may relate to him. Make someone with his own specific personality and some people will start to not feel "in tune" with their character. Lots of games suffer of this ...

So basically Hanako is a weeping angel and zapped Hisao back in time.

Nice.

EDIT: HO SHIT! THIS ALSO EXPLAINS WHY SHE COVERS HER FACE ALL THE TIME AND DOES NOT LIKE TO BE LOOKED AT! WE ARE ONTO SOMETHING RIGHT HERE!

Helbereth wrote:

NotSoClassy wrote:I Imagine what would someone think after skipping the whole thing and reading just the two last lines.

They would probably assume this fic was not so classy.

Ba dum tss

I Imagine what would someone think after skipping the whole thing and reading just the two last lines.

I agree with bhtooefr, a "bad ending" between Hanako and Lilly is probably inevitable. However, that may be a good thing, if it leads the two to restart their relationship on more equal footing (and with a better idea on how to deal with Mr. Hisao Clueless Nakai). One thing that worries me, is that ...

The further we go in the more I keep thinking that some big conflict will happen soon.

That shopping event better not be just some peacefull shopping event...

Not sure, but Having a priestess of the goddess of the arts in your party might be quite handy...

And to hell we go!

Epic buildup. But you can only build suspense for so long before it gets a bit annoying, just sayin.

Solistor wrote:None of the current proposed love interests will end up with Hisao in the end. Dewelar's gonna pull a fast one on us and have Hisao date Rin in the end. I can feel it in my spleen, man.

Or it's just gonna be the mythical harem ending.

timetravelzero wrote:

Sperance wrote:Another good chapter! Also, is... Is Miki a thrill seeker? She's... She's gonna end up boinking Hisao in a public place, isn't she

Heh. I approve of this idea.

Hisao's heart probably doesn't.

Steinherz wrote: Look at other genderswap stories (the Fionna and Cake episodes of Adventure time are the best examples).
The character's personality is also changed accordingly to more fit the gender.

Yea, it has something to do with different glands, in my opinion.