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And sorry about that habit, I have issues paragraphing sometimes. My English teachers have always gotten on me about that. Well, you could say you achieved that. I'd rather say you went WAY overboard... It didn't feel like Hisao woke up after falling asleep watching a movie but like waking up from ...

UltimateShammer wrote:

NotSoClassy wrote:Oh I can't wait for Emi and Rin MEC trooper team.

And Lilly should be a Sniper

And make sure to give Lilly Hyper-Reactive Pupils.

I allways use depth perception on my snipers cause they almolst never miss, but I might be getting too analytic and missing the joke here

Oh I can't wait for Emi and Rin MEC trooper team.

And Lilly should be a Sniper

bhtooefr wrote:Kenji's in 117, Hisao's in 119.

I'd recommend using 116, 118, or 120, unless you want to displace Kenji. (I forget if the neighboring unused rooms were 116 and 118, or 118 and 120. 118 would be a safe bet.)

Should have read more carefully while i was playing the game, silly me.

That said Im kinda hesitant when it comes to dialogue, since I havent done it yet. My past self had the same problem. When I first ventured into writing (for another fandom), one review pointed out that I was very sparse with dialogue, and my writing came off as rather dry. Since then, I've always ...

First floor, Room Number 19 . Key into keyhole, I open the door aaand we are in. You accidentally a digit. I'll be honest, I'm not sold on this chapter. First of all, there's just no impact, which is not helped by the fact that it's so short. By the time I got to the end, I would have maybe just st...

There you go, annother one, have fun reading! (or not, whichever you chose!) Chapter 1: Carrier has Arrived-Part 1 As far as bus rides go, this one was pretty peaceful. I even managed to sneak in a quick power-nap before I had to get out of the bus. Today was a hard day. It does not surprise me, giv...

Let me start off first by saying that you are a pretty good writer. I've written a lot of short stories and proofread even more, and I'm still bad, so kudos to you. Second off, I like this character. I personally don't care about the stigma against inserting yourself into a story (if that is indeed...

I'mma he~. And I'm content with editing all these for you, I need to get some finesse back into my brain, as I'm starting up a Pseudo-Route soon, along with a partner of mine. I'd like to not need an editor on my own pieces :) Pseudo route, interesting, can you tell for wich character it is or it's...

I actially do train Boxing, kickboxing, karate kyokushin, muai thai AND Kendo (with some Iaido in there too) but I do have to say from my experience the karate is ten times as brutal as boxing, the sheer amount of physical strenght and toughness required to take all the hits not only in the torso an...

Thanks. Riakai was oh so kind to edit the first part for me, and I've taken notice of what I did wrong. I'l try more next time, as to not give him (her? don't know) more mundane tasks wich he (she?) dosen't have to do anyway. As for the Boxing, lets just say that his father is not so mad with Kazuo'...

Yeah, that's a bit of a problem. As I said, I'm practically going in blind. See, I only have one odd year of english education, and all the others went into Deutch and French. So I'm not that fluent. Maybe that is a good excuse to become better at it. If you want to edit it and make it more manageab...

So, I played Katawa Shoujo a few months back, and felt kinda drawn to it. I lingered on the forums a bit, read some of the fanfictions, and then finally decided to make one of my own. First thing to say: I'm not a writer and I never ever did this before, so don't expect anything phenomenal out of me...