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Now I'm sort of thinking that this being a post-bad-end story, it'll in itself not have a happy ending at all. Which would be mighty interesting if written really well. And so far the writing is top-notch. :o A sad end will be...well, sad, at least for those of us who are suckers for stories with g...

And I'm reading this with my most brutal scottish accent I can muster, It's quite fun actually.

Well, the longer this goes on, the harder I find it to see this ending happily for any character. I wrote this after the last chapter, and it seems this is proving me right. If Lilly really comes back, I can't see Hisao ending up with either her or Hanako without the other being driven away... Spoi...

Will try to trim it now. (certainly an annoying job, but I think i did it...) Still looks pretty ugly, actually. Are you using a different editing program for this chapter? Your previous ones didn't have nearly this sort of problem. They did have this sort of problem, but I allways fixed it somehow...

Will try to trim it now.
(certainly an annoying job, but I think i did it...)

but it hides the spelling mistakes too

Truth is, I don't know how to deal with that :S

Doing it in Small font size seems to help.... it also makes it look kinda neat.

Poor Hisao, I fear he might be getting some of his screws loosened by all this. I picture him going insane in the next few chapters.
Hmm, Perhaps Kenji is just future Hisao trying to warn his past self to not mess with the girls, so he does not end up insane like him. Wouldn't that be funny?

AnathRaema wrote:The curse of Miki.

I'm in fear for my life now....what have I done?


By the way, removed half of the line breaks (which make the text look bigger and make me feel better because of it) and returned the font to normal size.

Chapter 1 Part 3 (how do you classify this anyway?) "Flying papers" The morning classes are about to give way to the lunch break, and amidst my school-induced hibernation I suddenly realize that I have no actual idea what to do. I don't know anybody in this class and probably they will al...

katawa shoujo could be a huge franchise. it could turn 3d and you have to walk around and interact and rember things. I''d pay for dat. Also, That post says that we will learn more next year, wich is next 1st of april. The one who made that post on 1st of april is a devil, you dont know whether or ...

Sorry for the lateness, but I do know nobody cares about OC's, so I doubt it was missed. I do it just for funzies and to polish up my english a bit, since I need it (a lot, if you notice some mistakes, its totally normal for me) That out of the way, enjoy!. Chapter 1, Part 2 Every attempt to look ar...

That's good, I like it. I will be following this fic. I see a lot of discouraging comments about it, or shall we say, warnings, but I would like to tell you that i like what you did so far. Also, Suzu was indeed ridiculously sleepy, but her total sleepiness in these scenes was probably Hisao's "...

"To be robbed of sight would be most terrible fate"
-Hisao's mind right after he steals a glance at Lilly's top without her knowing (cause she's blind, duh) during Hanako's route. Cracked me up, that one.

I'd say Emi. If I was Hisao and I had Arrythmia, I would have done everything I could to stay as healthy as I can (cause Im afraid of suddenly dying). Wich means running. Wich means Emi.