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by cake307
Sat Dec 21, 2013 5:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1562
Views: 752166

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 29 up 12/21]

Why do you hate us (me)? It almost feels like Hisao is dragging his feet so they both get sick of him and he doesn't have to decide at all by now, and that is not what I want :( Also, the whole "spend some time with me.. alone... in my room!" thing means Hanako has hit full on desperation ...
by cake307
Fri Dec 13, 2013 4:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1562
Views: 752166

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 28 up 12/12]

It's looking like I might get my Emi story, yay! But seriously, Hisao needs to get his butt into gear, whether it's because Lilly get's her head around to the "Holy crap, I want him back and we were so stupid!" idea and returns and forces him to move, or just because of some other deux ex ...
by cake307
Thu Nov 21, 2013 9:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1562
Views: 752166

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 26 up 11/21]

I'm progressively getting closer to the point where this story causes me to explode every chapter at this point. I must say, you should head into suspense writing or something, because you can almost always tell what's going to happen 26 chapters in, but I've only got vague guesses. A question, thou...
by cake307
Wed Nov 20, 2013 3:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1562
Views: 752166

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 25 up 11/15]

Comparing your story to others is just silly, and I say that as someone who can't help but compare my work to full on professional writers XD But seriously, you're not those authors, you're not writing the same story they are, and to be honest, your style is all your own, and it's great. Don't worry...
by cake307
Sat Nov 16, 2013 2:47 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1562
Views: 752166

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 25 up 11/15]

So after I finished the minor spaz attack this chapter gave me (thanks a lot .-.) I reread it and GAH! You're not a magnificent bastard, you're just evil. D: I'd finally put away "Lilly comes back and attempts to repair the relationship" as an option and now THERE IT IS AGAIN. Though my sl...
by cake307
Sun Nov 10, 2013 11:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1562
Views: 752166

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 24 up 11/10]

Chalk it up to Shizune being in a bad mood for...some reason :) . This is going to be a bad week for Hisao, I can see it now. He'll get no sympathy. I'm thinking even worse week than his first heart attack. I wonder just how many friends he'll actually have at the end of the week- Yoshi and Kenji a...
by cake307
Sat Nov 09, 2013 3:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1562
Views: 752166

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 23 up 11/3]

The one problem I've had is, I don't recall Emi being the type to back off of something she wanted, even to save someone else's emotions- it's kind of mean to say about my second favorite, but she did seem somewhat selfish. Hmmm...if you're talking about the most recent chapter, that wasn't the imp...
by cake307
Fri Nov 08, 2013 8:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1562
Views: 752166

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 23 up 11/3]

I created an account just to comment on this. I love this story, which in itself is a shock, since I tend to hate any story from Lilly's bad end, as she's my favorite. The pacing so far has been excellent- very few slow parts, but nothing so fast you almost lose track of what's going on, either. I'm...