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It's like all the benefits of a Helbereth-style story, and none of the maintaining a personal wiki just to keep my head screwed on. So I'm not the only one around here who has to keep up a parallel meta-document so I can remember my own continuity? That's really just how large works of fiction oper...

(Chapter Two continued...)         “So did you bring back anything interesting from your trip?” Jōji is fishing for a topic, being so new to the ranch that he doesn’t have the faintest clue how they conduct business. He only knows what they don’t do, which is anything relating to human trafficking ...

Sentence structure with parentheses is weird. The period at the end of the previous sentence is excluded, and it put after the end of the parentheses. The period at the end of the inside of the parentheses is excluded as well. So for "that isn't to say..." it would be "... natural li...

I gave forgetmenot advance notice that Kagami will be appearing in the Nekonomicon series, so maybe I prompted him to post something. :D Don't worry, I just brought her in as a convenient plot device — someone who can inadvertently cause all sorts of chaos and suspicion, while having absolutely no c...

(Chapter Two continued...)         “I know I pissed off the wrong people in some sense, but they deserved it,” Miki pleads from her now unfamiliar position in the passenger seat of the 750i. Sally can clearly see that she’d rather be driving, but isn’t about to concede to the upstart. “I didn’t set...

CHAPTER TWO 2007-08-21         For a moment, Hisao gives thought to summoning Mariko for assistance, but suspects she may not be spending her nights on campus. He’s going to have to deal with this situation himself. “What is it? Are you feeling sick again? Blocked pipes? Is it some other side effec...

(Chapter One conclusion...)         Having taken all day to make its presence known, the light of the late afternoon sun breaks through the cloud cover triumphantly. As it bathes the side of her face, Mariko makes her way confidently across the courtyard, cane outstretched more as a warning to othe...

Neko's Theme is now considered a White Mice work , as it probably should have been from the start. It's just that when it was created, it was for her appearance in a different game canon (which I have since retracted). If anyone else has mash-up ideas, name them and I'll give them a look. The two p...

I just edited the existing installments of the third book for cosmetic reasons. I've never really liked inserting blank lines between paragraphs, but that's what it seemed to take to make the text flow in the forum setting. Unfortunately, blank lines actually mean something now in the novel format (...

(Chapter One continued...)         They’re back in the same empty industrial parking lot as before, with the difference that this time, it’s wet.         “Are you ready to try it yourself?” Akira asks, hoping to put an end to the numerous cycles of hat straightening that Hanako seems so concerned w...

thank you cant wait to read all of this :) It has become fun to write it again, and I've produced thirteen pages in the last two days. Little upcoming things to look forward to: ● A cameo fanfic crossover featuring forgetmenot's Kagami, which will cause all sorts of chaos through no fault of hers ●...

"...And Nakai Makes Three" is the first book, followed by "Three of a Perfect Pair", followed by the (just barely started) "Into the Dark".

(Due to the longer chapter format, they will be posted in segments of up to six book pages or so, similar to the longest chapters in the previous books.) ————————————— CHAPTER ONE 2007-08-18         The sun filters through the thin drapes covering the window behind the bicycle rack. Hisao wonders wh...

PROLOGUE          Am I alone? he wonders, lying still in the darkness. No, of course he isn’t. His wife is no more than a meter away, happily snoozing, yet he still feels as if he is being watched, and that a great weight is pressing him into the mattress.          Maybe this is a dream, he hopes. ...

*sigh* and it had such promise. I was hoping at least for some happy endings. Miki was getting what she deserved , but I was really hoping to see a nice, happy triad between Neko, Hisao, and Iwanako … and maybe Mariko and Kenta making a nice couple. That's enough happy ending for me. You will get s...