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Just to point out, I kind of tried to emphasize that the biker was around a corner and couldn't see the entire event unfolding, leading to him not expecting Hisao to be there after quickly coming around a corner. I know that probably leads into an entire discussion about whether or not he would rea...

-The only closure she gets is in the form of a letter she sends Hisao, one that feasibly she didn't think to write herself, but was more likely urged to by someone else. the letter either gets no response or just a generic one that doesn't convey any feelings one way or another that he might have f...

CHAPTER THIRTEEN 2007-10-01         Neko is waiting alone in the lobby of the prosthetics office. She has the brace on her arm, as she sees no reason to be exposed to bumps and twists as she travels. It also conceals the main battle scar, the newest bandage, and the rather target-like oval bruise –...

CHAPTER TWELVE 2007-09-29         “You don’t have to do this, Mum,” Neko says. “I’ve gone to plenty of appointments in the city on my own, or with one of my friends along.”         “I know I don’t have to, but I wanted to talk to you anyhow, about that little dropoff.” Sally has to crane her neck m...

Megumeru wrote:To Kenji, she's one damn good feminist infiltrator--and he's not buying himself into her ruse. It's feminist country, and he is not going to stop for no woman unless it has eggs and sausages (which makes it a man).

Wait, doesn't that make it a hermaphrodite?

The nanobiotechnology arc, although some people might not like it, seems to me to be something that will be part of human life by the end of this century. I managed to get in on the beginning, and I now have former students working in the field. So... well, if you read Rin's arc in 'After The Dream...

It’s a good point like, I worry about having the George RR Martin effect with multiple points of view. That is, when your just getting into a characters story we leave them, and perhaps don’t catch up until much later in the story, or in another book altogether. :( I don’t plan to have any other Po...

There was a large time gap between chapters 14 - 16, due in part to my own miscalculation and because I wanted their relationship to go smoothly until the end of the school year. Which is a problem. Because things going well is really rather boring to read about, it lacks conflict, and any conflict...

CHAPTER ELEVEN 2007-09-24         The therapist gently and slowly rotates Neko’s hand until it faces palm up, causing her to wince noticeably, but it isn’t until he presses down on the open palm that she yelps and leaps out of the chair, knocking it out from under her in the process and landing her...

CHAPTER TEN 2007-09-23         Hisao can smell the incense before he even opens the door. I guess I know what Neko has been up to. He is quite surprised when he finds it unlocked, and that Neko is sitting on the floor, as close to cross-legged as she can be in her natural state, eyes closed. As he ...

CHAPTER NINE 2007-09-22         Neko taps at Molly’s door.         “Flying solo again?” Molly asks upon spotting her.         “He’s in the city. It’s not my weekend.”         “You’re really that chill about the situation? I don’t think I would be.”         “I have him twelve and a half out of every...

One thing I've always assumed: few characters in the KS world have functioning gaydar, and none of those who do are gay/bisexual. Takashi can't get it through his head that Molly is into girls. Neko miscalculates several times, though she gets it right more often than random chance. Miki sure doesn'...

CHAPTER EIGHT 2007-09-17         He walks out, looking quite incensed. Neko was prepared for morose or joyful, but not angry. “It was a travesty, and totally unfair,” Hisao complains, which is not his style. “She let me go through the entire test without telling me I had already failed it.”        ...

CHAPTER SEVEN 2007-09-15         Neko sits on an examining table in a room by herself, wondering why she can’t just sit on a chair if they have finished examining. Rather than continuing to wonder, she takes the initiative and hops down from the table and paces the room instead, reading charts abou...

That does work with paperbacks... On today's large monitors - and especially in dialogue heavy scenes - the effect is that 75% of all lines are indented, and a few lines start a bit further right^^° In effect it still looks like a wall of text without the free lines in between. First, I'm writing i...