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Great chapter! I love the cat statue thing, one of my favorite thing in fictions is when the author brings up things from the original to advance the story. Agreed, couldn't help but read it with a smile on my face the entire time That's a given with this story for me Thanks very much you two, I gr...

Mader Levap wrote:Pure fluff with sprinkle of comedy and erotica, huh.

Not that there is anything wrong with these, noo...

hehe...yeah, I tend to enjoy those things too... (had you noticed? )

Troy wrote:Aww, i am on a phone so my response wont be all to long.
its a nice story for sure even though shizune is a bit OOC, i really do like the writing.
Its btw Shichan. (I think)

Thank you very much, I'm glad yo ulike it.

Machoman wrote:I can't wait to see how you handle Hisao's parents

Neither can I...

We finally decide it's time to leave The Shanghai. As Misha and I get our money to pay for our parts of the bill, Shizune quickly puts down enough money to cover the whole thing. ["Shizune, no,"] I start to argue. ["Heeey!"] Misha wails, disappointed. Shizune loudly snaps her fin...

["Anyway, I should probably go,"] Misha says, smiling at us. ["What? No! Why?!"] I protest vehemently while Shizune frantically signs her own refusals. Misha smiles at us magnanimously, answering as she stands up, ["Today's your last day together for who knows how long,"...

monkeywitha6pack wrote:Really looking forward to the next chapter, I can only guess what will happen next and looking forward to seeing if I'm right

Thanks much...here it comes!

Mournful3ch0 wrote:

sg1cat wrote:[...I never would have guessed you were into something kinky like that, Shizune~!"]

Er, Shicchan?

Whoops! Ya got me there, will go back and fix.

Mournful3ch0 wrote:Very funny chapter, looking forward to more!

Thanks much, glad you enjoyed it!

I do hope you found the latest chapter enjoyable, in spite of your opinion on this matter. Yes I did. I was on mobile earlier so I kept my comment short. I liked the Back and forth between Hisao and Shizune as well. That part was very much like her ;-) Very cool, thanks much. :) No worries on the s...

Great chapter. Loved the back and forth between Shizune and Hisao trying to convince Misha, and Shizune's reaction afterwords. Thanks so much, the appreciation means a lot. :) This was one of my favorite, though a subsequent one that I've just finished writing comes pretty close. Still, I had a lot...

I was actually more bothered by what Misha claims Shizune said to her when Hisao introduced himself than by the PDAs, though :) . Thanks for reading! I was worried a bit about that being OOC, but my reasoning was this - we'd never been privy to any of the conversations Shizune and Misha had when Hi...

You're right. Shizune IS showing him more affection than in the last few months combined. Makes her seem a bit ooc here... Thanks very much for reading! I completely, but respectfully, disagree. But then, we've already had this conversation. ;-) Thanks much for taking the time to give your feedback...

We all finish eating at about the same time. The stillness of the room has blissfully settled in around us after my complete confession to my dearest friends about everything. It feels like a burden has been lifted from my chest. I can breathe more easily than ever before, since that ill-fated day i...

Lurked for a bit when you first posted the fic. I like where it's going! Alas, I never really have any constructive criticism (true for all fics I read here)- I read for entertainment and small errors dont bug me 'cuz I correct them myself while reading. If I'm entertained and like where the fic is...

Heh...I have a feeling that's fairly common among us fanfic writers. I liked Lilly a lot (I knew someone IRL who was a lot like her) but there were just so many things about her route that left me wanting. Hence, Developments :) . Although, in my case, it was more wanting to explore why things happ...