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That was a sweet chapter. Thanks, as always. :) I can see the idea of not seeing Misha for about a year at least, after seeing her everyday for 3 years, would be rather upsetting for Shizune. Not only that, but afaik, Misha and Hisao are her only friends. She's led a very solitary life, due to her ...

The sun’s rays bathe us as the cool wind blows across the roof. Smirking still at her victory in our banter as the breeze ruffles her hair, Shizune turns to Misha and asks, [So what will you be doing after you arrive in New York?] Putting the last bite of her dinner in her mouth, Misha puts the empt...

As always, sg1, I find myself grinning like a madman by the end of the chapter. There are a few clouds on the horizon with Jiggy, but that should only add another level of hilarity at the expense of our Master of Romance. *Thumbs up* Thanks kindly for the feedback, I'm always very glad to learn tha...

If Lilly's and Shizune's fathers are brothers, then why don't the girls share the same family name? (Satou vs. Hakamichi?)

About twenty minutes later we leave the store. Both girls should be weighed down with the many bags of their purchases, but somehow I got stuck with the bulk of them. Shizune and Misha, however, only carry a single bag, each. This allows the girls to sign back and forth as we walk, while I can only ...

This time, Shizune comes out wearing a pear of jeans Wow, a pear made out of jeans? That's quite a sight! Hm...what a fruity mistake! Thanks, fixed... [For letting Misha and I talk in private,] she signs. Misha and me Fixed, thanks much. :-) More commentary will have to wait; I'm on a mobile device...

After yet again winding our way through the labyrinthine town, we find ourselves before our final shop. Like the other stores in the village, it's a quaint little building. I understand your desire for variation, but a town and a village are not exactly the same... Thanks for pointing that out. As ...

After yet again winding our way through the labyrinthine town, we find ourselves before our final shop. Like the other stores in the village, it's a quaint little building. We enter the front door with the girls leading the way this time, to find ourselves greeted by racks upon racks of clothing. I ...

Loving the fic, well written. Shizune's attitude and OTTness isn't really bothering me that much. It's not a blatant screw off of Character, like Rin suddenly making sense or Emi becoming the world's most mature person ever. Just a slight deviation I can agree to look over. :wink: Thanks very much,...

Sometimes you just need to read something to put a grin on your face and this fic brings out the grins by the truckload. Thanks for lightening things up a bit sg1cat. Awww, thanks...your reply had the same effect on me, it's great to know my story made you smile so. :-D I shall gladly continue to l...

I have to say, given the influx of darker stories lately, it's good to have a quality bit of fluffiness like this to break it up :D . I'm glad to have contributed. :-D Stay tuned, there's lots more quality fluff on the way! ;-) One error I noticed: taking in the site of so many books Should be &quo...

13loop wrote:This Shizune is much more affectionate that portrayed on the story, and I'm loving it! Good job, like always.

Thank you, I really appreciate the feedback. I'm very glad you like it so much!

monkeywitha6pack wrote:Great chapter as always, I really like the way you treat them as a couple

Thanks very much. I'm having a lot of fun writing them that way.

Shizune continues to hold my hand tightly as we exit the glass shop, slowing from her frenetic pace to allow Misha and I to catch up with her. Wordlessly she leads us again through the winding streets of the quaint little town, saying nothing about where we're going, though she does glance over her ...

Please keep this up. I'm really enjoying this. Thanks very much, Themocaw...getting a compliment on my story from you was a big deal to me. Your story, "A Weekend At Hisao's" was amazing, definitely my favorite Shizune fan fic. I also really like the sequel you've been penning. I'll make ...