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Shizune finally pulls away after we kiss for some time. She looks at me with a sweet smile, caressing my cheek. I smile back at her, as she sits snuggly nestled between me and the wall, both of her legs draped over mine. Though she was sitting more completely on my lap when we started to make out, i...

[I know I've been lousy to you, and I want to make up for lost time. When you told me yesterday that you love me, something finally clicked inside.] I smile at her words. She hesitates, and I wait patiently, sensing she has more to tell me. Soon her hands move again, [but, I can't really take credi...

I'm really not sure how much time has passed since I started rubbing Shizune's feet, but it's been quite a while now. I can tell because of the burning sensation I feel from my fingertips all the way to my shoulders and my back. I'm not about to breathe one word of complaint, however. Those dark blu...

Shizune's eyes gleam at this, her grin twisting into a smirk as she looks at me with a keen gaze. [Is that so?] she asks. [It made a difference. I am impressed. We'll have to play more often, it's even more interesting tahn the first time we played.] The "tahn" should be "than"....

Shizune sits across from me, her brow furrowed in concentration as she looks at the game board on her computer tablet. For the last hour, we played without words. At first, my girlfriend attacked with wreckless confidence, taking control of half of Africa and much of the Southeast. She stretched her...

Another great chapter :D I really like the way you wrote shizune Thanks much, it's great fun writing her and Hisao. I'm glad you're enjoying it so much! :) Small grammatical question: I thought I had recognized the colorful display its presenting right now Should the its be an it's Otherwise, anoth...

I'm staring into Shizune's eyes, feeling both nervous and eager about the train ride home, when I hear a train whistle blowing off in the distance behind me. It's either calling for my doom or my triumph. Maybe both. What will Shizune command me to do? She's got possession of me for a full day. [Fee...

What have I gotten myself into? The train equivalent of the mile high club? No comment. ;) The moral of this chapter is : Never go into a battle of wits unarmed. :wink: Indeed! Think our protagonist has learned his lesson? :P A very nice thing to find after my first good night's sleep in a couple o...

We make good time down the hill, hustling along at nearly a jog. My breathing quickly becomes labored, but I manage to keep up the pace Shizune sets. As we go down the hill, my mind drifts back to her refusal to share what upset her so about the private conversation she and Lilly shared. It bothers ...

Great chapter. Really like how Shizune and Lilly have started to reconcile. It's obviously going to take a while, but I'm glad to see they're trying. Thanks much Anton. As always, your feedback is very appreciated. :) We may yet see more of Lilly as our two young lovers carry on...stay tuned! ;-)

Shizune and I look over at the doorway to her dorm room in surprise as Lilly stands there, waiting. [What does she want?] Shizune signs, glancing at me with an irritated expression. Shrugging, I answer, [I don't know, she hasn't said yet.] I glance at the blonde in the doorway. She's stands in a pos...

monkeywitha6pack wrote:Another great chapter!

Thanks! Most appreciated.

Not personally a huge fan of sex scenes in fanfiction, but this was done very tastefully so I didn't have any problem with it, not that I expected any different from you. :) I also like when Hisao's heart actually acts up. Trying to word this in a way that doesn't make me sound like I like these ch...

Warmth. Comfort. The world is cozy and blissful. Against my naked body, the press of warm and soft skin, her gentle form molded to how I lay. My arm tightens about her, and a gentle sigh happily fills my ears as she presses closer against me. Black hair covers my face, tickling me as my breath spill...

Shizune and I say nothing more, we simply hold each other tightly for a while longer. When we part, I ask her, [So, should we go to your room, or mine?] [Yours,] she signs without hesitation, adding as an explanation, [I don't want to sleep in my room again.] Sighing heavily, she continues, [Misha a...