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Plus saying 'I undersatnd you very very young and have bad reading comprehension that's not advice that's just mean

I said the last section was mean I looked at your advise about the route and i looked at like 5 other peoples advice to continue it and I went with them. Saying my writing is literary noodling is not advice. Pointing out what areas I need to work on is advice. Accusing me of only doing this route fo...

Thanks for that, couldn't have said that better myself, I fact I tried and ended up shooting myself in the foot

The story starts 3 days after Hisao gets to the school and he gets a phone call from a depressed Iwanako. Hisao is also depressed but feels bad that she's so depressed about what she did to him so he accepts the offer of a clean slate with her. The story's not over I'm just remaking the first chapter

I really like this idea, looking foward to it

I'm not taking the advise as mean, I understood what (s)he said what I'm taking is mean is the last part

I meant on the character. No offense but if I was looking for advice on writing I would ask someone's like themocat or forgetmenot or semisoftcheese or sargcat (or whatever it is) or a writer I'm a fan of So, you'd rather paw around in the dark, praying for the right person to come along and hand y...

I'm speaking my intent not because that I don't have my own reaction to this, seriously though. I halted writing my Hanako epilogue due to health reasons, not because everyone hated it.. seriously, why let people stop you? this is a fan-based community, you are you for writing your own story, surel...

Saying someone's terrible and should stop writing isn't advice it's just mean but w/e let's end the fight so I can move on and try to make something someone will enjoy

I meant on the character. No offense but if I was looking for advice on writing I would ask someone's like themocat or forgetmenot or semisoftcheese or sargcat (or whatever it is) or a writer I'm a fan of

First off I didn't ask you for advice on the route I asked for advice on the character I had my mind set on the route much before I asked you, and second yeah you worded that very mean, if you read the comments you would see the reason for all the errors and that they are or well were getting fixed

It's like I don't see a fic I don't like and tell them to stop writing and stop trying I let them go on maybe make a post and try to hep them so it can become better

But what your writing has nothing remotely to do with Iwanako being with Hisao. And I'm just not a person to do whats been done. I was big fans of those routes you mentioned I would feel that no meter what I would put what I loved from those stories into mine without intention. But that wasn't const...

And the reason I didn't someone like miki suzu or any of the ones you listed is not cause of the 'baggage' they carry its the fact its been done, I don't want prime time. I want to write someone and not feel like I'm copying themocat or numb or semisoftcheese

So basically no one thinks I should write this? I guess I'll sleep on this but no one is even letting me have a chance, i wrote one chapter screwed up and spent the days since I posted that one rewriting it, But i need to decide on whether or not to update it for every person who wants to see it 5 d...