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Unless we're talking about the mystery girl being an actual tentacle monster :wink: FUND IT. Oh, and a suggestion: Instead of the full bracket capitalization and bold letters for choices, maybe try two lines and center it? Eg. replace: [ASK HIM IF THERE ARE ANY OTHER TIMES / TELL HIM YOU’LL GO (LIE...

sg1cat wrote:[...I never would have guessed you were into something kinky like that, Shizune~!"]

Er, Shicchan?

Very funny chapter, looking forward to more!

Open speculation time? Open speculation time. 1.) The abandonment of Yamaku leaves Hanako in search of a job. I.) She finds work at Hisao's research lab. II.) She finds work in the tech industry and somehow meets another Mutou. III.) She makes a very embarrassing phone call to Lilly to ask for money...

It's outrageous. It's fantastic. It's hilarious. Sure, it's not perfect, but I really enjoyed it!

God, that title cracked me up.

Aaaaaand now I know I did the right thing by not reading all of Doomish's stuff. :shock: That .rar he is offering for download is full of goodies. Right now I'm about 1/2 way through "With Apologies to Harlan Ellison". This is some seriously, seriously dark reading right now. I don't know...

I lean in, close my eyes, and press my lips against Hisao's. So what's going to happen to Lilly? Well, to quote "In Ruin" by Doomish: "No. No no no. You don't--" Lilly shuffles the phone even closer until her voice is clear as crystal. "You don't understand. When I tell His...

Today... was a sad day. I'll go into reading a depressing fic no prob as long as I know what's coming. After reading the Suzu route a few weeks back, this was not what I had in mind. Not to say that I dislike it, but it just won't fit in my head-canon. Then again, I can never really see the reserved...

...deep web , and found the... Commas are unnecessary after conjunctions. You seem to do a lot of this in your writing. “I’ll take my chances” shrugging off... Missing a comma. ...the door, as I don’t want Kenji to go snooping... You could remove the comma here or remove the 'as' and start a new se...

Helbereth wrote:

Mournful3ch0 wrote:Yeah, took me nearly a week and a half of reading when I got the chance.

Only that long? o.O

I may not have alluded to 'when I got the chance' correctly. What I mean by that is every minute I wasn't otherwise preoccupied, I was reading your story.
And your sig isn't so bad either

Just catched up on all of it. (3 weeks of time) Yeah, took me nearly a week and a half of reading when I got the chance. Helbereth, this story is amazing. At pushing over 400,000 words, this story manages to stay dynamic without breaking the OOC barrier (Hisao aside, for he changes with every route...

This one is on my reading list, though I haven't actually cracked it open yet. However, I saw something while browsing the forums earlier that I thought was funny. The image came back bigger than intended, but if you right click and 'view image', then look to the far right, you'll see what I mean. ...

AntonSlavik020 wrote:Maybe she did the thing where she covers her mouth and laughs silently?

sg1cat wrote:Misha's laughter joins with her as easily as if it were her own.

Nah, just seems like a slip in the character. Nobody is at fault, it just seems ill fit to the situation.

Hehe...quite so, but...! She's not deaf as in cannot vocalize. She inadvertently makes a noise when they have sex in the Student Council room, but quickly stops as soon as she realizes what's she's done. Also, isn't there reference to Jigoro paying for a tutor to help her speak, even though she's d...

sg1cat wrote:For the first point, that's actually taken verbatim from the game itself. It's Shizune laughing.

... I-I don't even... Doesn't it strike anyone as odd that the deaf-mute is laughing? ;_;

Well, uh. Ahem. Carry on then

Awesome! Very excited about this, as I always felt Shizune's end needed a follow up and you deliver! Very well written, but this one thing bugs me. [Yuuko! You do the pose, too!] Shizune signs while Misha says the words for her so Yuuko can understand. [Afterwards, we can go for tea.] She laughs, as...