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by Mournful3ch0
Mon Dec 09, 2013 9:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Completed)
Replies: 1243
Views: 1216560

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 12/9)

Just out of curiosity, how much of a bitch was she in the other route? My bitchometer reads out at about 7.8 of 10 on the display. She is only superseded by Rika who fluctuates between 5.9 and 9.2 during the route. As you have already figured out, reading the other Saki route would do you no good w...
by Mournful3ch0
Mon Dec 02, 2013 7:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 854
Views: 507089

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 11/06/13 ~ C.42 - Unexpected Layov

Hisao is getting laid. I would so kick his ass at Mario Cart... There are only a few of them hiding among the anime, science fiction, action, and drama films, and they're all modern classics, but I seem to be dating a hopeless romantic, and, honestly, there might be one of those inside of me. If no...
by Mournful3ch0
Sun Dec 01, 2013 3:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
Replies: 237
Views: 130603

Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout

Mirage_GSM wrote:Glad you liked it.
Most certainly. Had me laughing and rereading for a good few minutes before I thought, "Hey, I need some quotes in my sig to balance it anyway."

And so that happened. Keep doing what you do, for the love of all that is sacred and holy.
Godspeed.
by Mournful3ch0
Sun Dec 01, 2013 3:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 854
Views: 507089

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 11/06/13 ~ C.42 - Unexpected Layov

Riakai wrote:WISH ME LUCK.
Best of luck. And make sure to keep prying eyes off of the coming pages... for reasons.
You may have some explaining to do.
by Mournful3ch0
Sun Dec 01, 2013 12:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
Replies: 237
Views: 130603

Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout

That was said to be an error, though. Although removing that scene would require some significant changes. As it is now, the best interpretation is, Lilly decided to come back. Maybe Hanako had a setback or something. Maybe Lilly's family turned out to be horrible. As far as I know, the only route ...
by Mournful3ch0
Sat Nov 23, 2013 11:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two halves make a whole [Iwanako pseudo route] [on hold]
Replies: 75
Views: 28087

Re: Two halves make a whole [Iwanako pseudo route]

Excellent idea, but the writing is very fast paced. Hisao's letter was a bit too informal and short for my tastes, I feel he should have elaborated a bit more on some subjects as Iwanako did, as meaningless of a drabble that may be. Possibly expound upon the meeting of Shizune and Misha or something...
by Mournful3ch0
Tue Nov 12, 2013 10:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 197074

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 12/11/2013)

dewelar wrote:Enjoyed this chapter, as always.
Mournful3ch0 wrote:Hanako's birthday is in the next installment?
Since Trivun seems to be going scene-by-scene, the next installment would be the reflection of "Truancy", with her birthday the one following.
*snaps fingers* Foiled again!
by Mournful3ch0
Tue Nov 12, 2013 10:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 197074

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 12/11/2013)

Hanako's birthday is in the next installment?

Oh my...

Oh... my.

Oh my.

I'm absolutely thrilled! My fascination with this story has hit a fever pitch, glad to see another post!

I am monitoring this thread.
by Mournful3ch0
Sun Nov 10, 2013 11:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1562
Views: 778226

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 24 up 11/10]

dewelar wrote: Chalk it up to Shizune being in a bad mood for...some reason :) .
This is going to be a bad week for Hisao, I can see it now. He'll get no sympathy.
by Mournful3ch0
Sun Nov 10, 2013 9:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1562
Views: 778226

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 24 up 11/10]

I liked this chapter, as with the rest, but why did Shizune totally blow off the fact that Hisao told them about his arrhythmia and collapsed just the day before? They didn't seem very concerned at all that he could very well have died the other day. Just my observation. As of late, this is my favor...
by Mournful3ch0
Wed Nov 06, 2013 11:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Pseudodrabbles
Replies: 28
Views: 10183

Re: Fuck you, Hisao Nakai.

You're not a Doomish alt account, are you? ;)

Ah, kidding. Very short and sw... er, grim.

Edit: Idiocy removed. Continue on.

Cheers!
by Mournful3ch0
Wed Nov 06, 2013 5:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Pseudodrabbles
Replies: 28
Views: 10183

Re: Hanako Pseudodrabble

Recidivism wrote:
Well, i can't really see the point of this.
There is no point. Isn't it lovely?
Positively! :D

Image

y pls
by Mournful3ch0
Wed Nov 06, 2013 5:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: OC "Neko" - Route [reconsidered]
Replies: 123
Views: 37858

Re: OC "Neko" - Route [cancelled]

Hey NekoDude, if you come back and read this I just wanted to say that I'm sorry if my critique came off as negative rather than constructive. I meant it when I said that I'd love to see the end of the story, but alas, the cuts were taken while I was away and wasn't given the opportunity. I just wan...
by Mournful3ch0
Tue Nov 05, 2013 9:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: OC "Neko" - Route [reconsidered]
Replies: 123
Views: 37858

Re: OC "Neko" - Route

I know it isn't totally finished yet, but this is what I have to say about it so far. The pacing is insane . Looking at the other stories, Hanako's is about 4-5 weeks(?), with Lilly, Rin, and Emi around nine. Shizune's is something crazy like 9 months because of the timeskip to graduation, but I dig...
by Mournful3ch0
Sun Nov 03, 2013 6:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
Replies: 296
Views: 179650

Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1

...I take it you're a Mindcrack fan and you're here because of Millbee Though not charged, I am equally guilty. I think around episode 12 I noticed the KS vids were popping up in my subscription box and I watched 4-5. After getting an idea of what the VN was, I downloaded it and haven't looked back...