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- Mon Dec 09, 2013 9:09 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Completed)
- Replies: 1243
- Views: 1216560
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 12/9)
Just out of curiosity, how much of a bitch was she in the other route? My bitchometer reads out at about 7.8 of 10 on the display. She is only superseded by Rika who fluctuates between 5.9 and 9.2 during the route. As you have already figured out, reading the other Saki route would do you no good w...
- Mon Dec 02, 2013 7:06 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 854
- Views: 507089
Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 11/06/13 ~ C.42 - Unexpected Layov
Hisao is getting laid. I would so kick his ass at Mario Cart... There are only a few of them hiding among the anime, science fiction, action, and drama films, and they're all modern classics, but I seem to be dating a hopeless romantic, and, honestly, there might be one of those inside of me. If no...
- Sun Dec 01, 2013 3:18 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
- Replies: 237
- Views: 130603
Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout
Most certainly. Had me laughing and rereading for a good few minutes before I thought, "Hey, I need some quotes in my sig to balance it anyway."Mirage_GSM wrote:Glad you liked it.
And so that happened. Keep doing what you do, for the love of all that is sacred and holy.
Godspeed.
- Sun Dec 01, 2013 3:15 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
- Replies: 854
- Views: 507089
Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 11/06/13 ~ C.42 - Unexpected Layov
Best of luck. And make sure to keep prying eyes off of the coming pages... for reasons.Riakai wrote:WISH ME LUCK.
You may have some explaining to do.
- Sun Dec 01, 2013 12:31 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
- Replies: 237
- Views: 130603
Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout
That was said to be an error, though. Although removing that scene would require some significant changes. As it is now, the best interpretation is, Lilly decided to come back. Maybe Hanako had a setback or something. Maybe Lilly's family turned out to be horrible. As far as I know, the only route ...
- Sat Nov 23, 2013 11:46 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Two halves make a whole [Iwanako pseudo route] [on hold]
- Replies: 75
- Views: 28087
Re: Two halves make a whole [Iwanako pseudo route]
Excellent idea, but the writing is very fast paced. Hisao's letter was a bit too informal and short for my tastes, I feel he should have elaborated a bit more on some subjects as Iwanako did, as meaningless of a drabble that may be. Possibly expound upon the meeting of Shizune and Misha or something...
- Tue Nov 12, 2013 10:32 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
- Replies: 378
- Views: 197074
Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 12/11/2013)
*snaps fingers* Foiled again!dewelar wrote:Enjoyed this chapter, as always.
Since Trivun seems to be going scene-by-scene, the next installment would be the reflection of "Truancy", with her birthday the one following.Mournful3ch0 wrote:Hanako's birthday is in the next installment?
- Tue Nov 12, 2013 10:09 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
- Replies: 378
- Views: 197074
Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 12/11/2013)
Hanako's birthday is in the next installment?
Oh my...
Oh... my.
Oh my.
I'm absolutely thrilled! My fascination with this story has hit a fever pitch, glad to see another post!
I am monitoring this thread.
Oh my...
Oh... my.
Oh my.
I'm absolutely thrilled! My fascination with this story has hit a fever pitch, glad to see another post!
I am monitoring this thread.
- Sun Nov 10, 2013 11:37 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 778226
Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 24 up 11/10]
This is going to be a bad week for Hisao, I can see it now. He'll get no sympathy.dewelar wrote: Chalk it up to Shizune being in a bad mood for...some reason .
- Sun Nov 10, 2013 9:23 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 778226
Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 24 up 11/10]
I liked this chapter, as with the rest, but why did Shizune totally blow off the fact that Hisao told them about his arrhythmia and collapsed just the day before? They didn't seem very concerned at all that he could very well have died the other day. Just my observation. As of late, this is my favor...
- Wed Nov 06, 2013 11:24 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Pseudodrabbles
- Replies: 28
- Views: 10183
Re: Fuck you, Hisao Nakai.
You're not a Doomish alt account, are you?
Ah, kidding. Very short and sw... er, grim.
Edit: Idiocy removed. Continue on.
Cheers!
Ah, kidding. Very short and sw... er, grim.
Edit: Idiocy removed. Continue on.
Cheers!
- Wed Nov 06, 2013 5:29 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Pseudodrabbles
- Replies: 28
- Views: 10183
Re: Hanako Pseudodrabble
Positively!Recidivism wrote:There is no point. Isn't it lovely?Well, i can't really see the point of this.
y pls
- Wed Nov 06, 2013 5:24 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: OC "Neko" - Route [reconsidered]
- Replies: 123
- Views: 37858
Re: OC "Neko" - Route [cancelled]
Hey NekoDude, if you come back and read this I just wanted to say that I'm sorry if my critique came off as negative rather than constructive. I meant it when I said that I'd love to see the end of the story, but alas, the cuts were taken while I was away and wasn't given the opportunity. I just wan...
- Tue Nov 05, 2013 9:59 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: OC "Neko" - Route [reconsidered]
- Replies: 123
- Views: 37858
Re: OC "Neko" - Route
I know it isn't totally finished yet, but this is what I have to say about it so far. The pacing is insane . Looking at the other stories, Hanako's is about 4-5 weeks(?), with Lilly, Rin, and Emi around nine. Shizune's is something crazy like 9 months because of the timeskip to graduation, but I dig...
- Sun Nov 03, 2013 6:25 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
- Replies: 296
- Views: 179650
Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1
...I take it you're a Mindcrack fan and you're here because of Millbee Though not charged, I am equally guilty. I think around episode 12 I noticed the KS vids were popping up in my subscription box and I watched 4-5. After getting an idea of what the VN was, I downloaded it and haven't looked back...