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by Otzee
Sat Nov 02, 2013 9:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction OC Intro "That Girl"
Replies: 11
Views: 4284

Re: Fanfiction OC Intro "That Girl"

Thanks for the feedback. Appreciate it.
by Otzee
Sat Nov 02, 2013 6:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction OC Intro "That Girl"
Replies: 11
Views: 4284

Re: Fanfiction OC Intro "That Girl"

Silentcook wrote:You're not really writing here. You're trying to script instead.

I suggest you take a look at the tips stickied at the top of this section, the very first post discusses this topic. You shouldn't stop at the first post either.
A'ight. Well I guess approaching this way wont make people interested.
by Otzee
Sat Nov 02, 2013 6:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction OC Intro "That Girl"
Replies: 11
Views: 4284

Re: Fanfiction OC Intro "That Girl"

That's all for now.
by Otzee
Sat Nov 02, 2013 6:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction OC Intro "That Girl"
Replies: 11
Views: 4284

Re: Fanfiction OC Intro "That Girl"

ACT 1 - Day 2 -(Morning) Dormitory- Damn it, I fell asleep in my school clothes. Now they'll be all wrinkled. I take my morning pills and have a quick shower before heading off to School. -(Morning) Classroom- Unlike usual I'm not early, if I didn't bump into Kenji on the way here I would have been ...
by Otzee
Sat Nov 02, 2013 6:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction OC Intro "That Girl"
Replies: 11
Views: 4284

Re: Fanfiction OC Intro "That Girl"

-(Late Afternoon) Dormitory- [Hisao]: "Please don't bump into Kenji, Please don't bump into Kenji:" - I repeated as I walk towards my room towards the end of the hall. [Kenji]: "Please what?- He spoke right behind me. I stood metres from my room, still, in somewhat of a state of panic...
by Otzee
Sat Nov 02, 2013 6:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction OC Intro "That Girl"
Replies: 11
Views: 4284

Re: Fanfiction OC Intro "That Girl"

-(After School) Library- I grab a book about the History of Space. I've Probably read it before but it seems interesting enough. I take my place at the back of the library near Hanako, sitting on a beanbag, who's currently throwing a glance or two hoping I don't notice. [Hisao]: "Yo." - I ...
by Otzee
Sat Nov 02, 2013 6:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction OC Intro "That Girl"
Replies: 11
Views: 4284

Re: Fanfiction OC Intro "That Girl"

-(Afternoon) The caferteria- Full as always. Surprisingly we managed to find an empty area to sit and eat our lunches. Curry bread and chocolate milk for me. Looks like the other two have soup with what appears to be chucks of crab floating in it. The food is always appealing, yeah right. [Shizune]:...
by Otzee
Sat Nov 02, 2013 5:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction OC Intro "That Girl"
Replies: 11
Views: 4284

Fanfiction OC Intro "That Girl"

Decided I'd attempt to write some Fanfic. It's just an intro much like the original (You'll notice some similarities and changes to the original) this is on purpose. I wanted to captivate the readers by giving them a familiar atmosphere while Introducing the "Heroine". I've used a similar ...
by Otzee
Tue Sep 10, 2013 12:15 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The "feels" bazaar.
Replies: 2254
Views: 599411

Re: What puts a smile on my face.

Meh, I'm not going to argue. If making a topic is such a crime then I'll just stop talking. As for the necro, that was purely an accident.. blame Google. Bye!
by Otzee
Mon Sep 09, 2013 7:00 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The "feels" bazaar.
Replies: 2254
Views: 599411

What puts a smile on my face.

The after-feels were some powerful feels, but ALAS! I have found a solution.. If you're like me and had felt this emptiness inside after experiencing your first play-through then I have some uplifting truth.. the truth is that one of those girls appeals to you in some way (hey maybe they all do? :P)...
by Otzee
Sun Sep 08, 2013 6:20 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The "feels" bazaar.
Replies: 2254
Views: 599411

What's going on..

This game screws with my head.. All these mixed feelings after completing a majority of arcs. I don't know whether to recommend this or protect people from It, it seems like something everyone should experience but It's changed my life in ways I didn't think it would and not entirely for the better....
by Otzee
Sun Sep 08, 2013 6:05 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Background Babbling
Replies: 23
Views: 9450

Re: Background Babbling

My bad...
by Otzee
Sun Sep 08, 2013 2:13 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Background Babbling
Replies: 23
Views: 9450

Re: Background Babbling

I spent a good 20 minutes or so trying to listen to the background class chatter, found it interesting in some of the things I heard. Things like; "Less profinitiy and fighting n stuff" "Walla walla bing bang" "People listening to this and talking about it" "Chitty...