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Great update! I only have a couple things to ask about: "Later Hisao, say hi to Kenta for me later." I believe that period should be a comma, and the repetition with "later" is a little jarring. Perhaps this is to characterize Masato's style of speech, but I just felt compelled to point it out. Also ...

Nicer denizens of the forums might disagree, but since I'm beginning to cultivate a reputation as the resident She-Wolf Fanfiction Nazi, I may as well go whole hog. I may just be putting my opinion in here as a common bystander to your constructively critical comments, Leaty, but I find your more ...

Ah that's great to hear you're on track to pump out another update soon! I just recently jumped onto this train and I have absolutely no complaints. All I really want to say is that I love your writing and I'll be looking forward to whatever you have planned for the next chapter!

Short but sweet, and I really like how well you describe the scene from Shizune's point of view. Keep up the quality writing!

There's still a long way to go. As previously said, we like to take things in different directions than KS took, so there's a difference in overall pacing, as well as new story arcs, like the Council's "petition mission" a little earlier on. With KA's bigger emphasis on the importance of the ...

Yep, I definitely plan on seeing this story through to the finale. I have to say I'm a little curious about where the finale will be. Looking at the state of the timeline at act 4 chapter 15, you could easily make an act 5 and end it there, but you could perhaps cram everything into a long act 4 to ...

It's great that you're still sticking with it to the end! I joined in late but I've read and loved everything so far, so I'm sure that this newest update will not disappoint. I personally find switching out Hisao as the main male protagonist with two very interesting and different characters to be ...

Eh, don't fret too much. With the progress you've made so far I'm sure you'll break the curse!

Anyways, we can wait for as long as you need. As long as you keep pumping out all these great updates!

I just read through all of this and I've gott say I kinda like Yuuma's style. He's so non-committed to everything that he comes off seeming like a total dick, but it isn't something that really defines who he is. There's more to him than that. Plus, that tired and non-committal feeling just clicks ...

I can't apologize enough for the lack of updates recently, but I commute 3 hours daily and I'm gearing up for a cross-country move in the next month, so writing time is scarce these days. I'll definitely finish this though, however much time it'll take. Well say no more! I think all of us readers ...

Man, I think I read through everything you've posted so far on this Kagami pseudo-route in just a couple days. It's just that good! I just want you to know you're definitely good at this, and I'm gonna be waiting ferverously for each and every update from now on. Oh also, I appreciated what I think ...

Man, I'm so happy I finally got caught up. Just recently joined in on the forum, and I sure as hell haven't been disappointed. When I first saw this idea of an Akira pseudo-route, I've gotta say that I was a little skeptical. It wasn't until I'd read the Suzu and Aiko pseudo-routes that I realized ...

I just want to start by saying what an amazing writer you are. Even after having just read some amazing pseudo-routes like Aiko's and Suzu's, I think I may have appreciated the message that you brought across in your Rika pseudo-route. After reading the "good" ending (and almost crying afterwards) I ...

Hi, so I'm pretty much new to the forum and Katawa Shoujo (discovered it a couple weeks ago, crashed through all of the routes in a week and a half, and an emotional train-wreck ensued). I basically joined to tell you how AMAZING of a job you've done in construing this pseudo-route for Aiko. I've ...