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Hoitash wrote:
Soon-hee stared at me as if I might vanish if she blinked, “You came back.”

Is that a reference I missed or a typo?

Oh its this again, yeah the Hanako part 1-3 was amazing but the part 4 epilogue was a bit of a buzz kill. It's very difficult, nigh impossible actually, for anyone to kill off likeable characters in the end of a story and still have me find it enjoyable. I have to say the way he did it was interesti...

Honestly this is kind of what I thought would happen to Hanako if you ran into her bad end, that or an eventual suicide, without Hisao/Lilly there for her, who knows if she ever would have gotten better, or just gone downhill and gotten worse.

Really, I wanted to explore the possibility of Hanako x Akira. Nobody's tried it AFAIK. (This actually started out as Hanako x Akira being concurrent with Lilly's route, but too many things didn't line up for them actually being together.) Other than my own incomplete attempt at an Akira x Hanako, ...

Oh glorious wall of text, teach me your secrets... Thank you for the much awaited update!

Just my personal suggestion - the name alone gave me a dim view on this eh... story, before I even started. I get the feeling this was written hastily under some bias(feels inspired in game for instance). Overall suggestion - Change thread title, it's a major turn off, tone down the blatant anger in...

NekoDude wrote:
What kind of twisted, rat-bastard psychotic

Just my opinion - psychotic rat-bastard sounds better, rat-bastard psychotic just doesn't sound right.

So, it's not cancelled per say, it's being rewritten from scratch? Cancelled implies it's over and done with but you just said you're redoing it. To be honest all of my attempts at writing have looked so bad(to me anyways) that I didn't have the heart to waste space on the forums with them. I attemp...

I read this story a while ago, pretty nice one in my opinion, the music was a great touch, but I didn't feel like making an account to comment on it so I left it as it was. While I do think the "emo/suicide Hanako" character is a bit overused and expected, it's nice (imo) to see someone wr...

Thank you OP, while I have to call BS on this really being in game, I needed the laugh that this brought.

I interpreted it as Hanako wouldn't become that much better socially if you don't befriend her (in other words, if you don't go down Lilly's or Hanako's route), so Lilly stays in Japan because she feels she can't leave Hanako alone to be with her family. That wasn't my theory . It was outright stat...

He could have heard it from Lilly, or simply figured it out through gossip/asking around/common sense,

bhtooefr wrote:A year has passed, and I'm still working at Yamaku. They're finally upgrading all of their old computers. Guess whose job it is to image all of them?


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Erm. what?

Driller, I see what you did there, and oddly enough I can see Misha doing this.

An excerpt from something I abandoned a while back, this is how I handled a character's death scene from the first person perspective: Coughing and gasping as blood filled my lungs, my oxygen deprived mind tried to delay the inevitable, sending me twitching involuntarily as I listened to the heavys...