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No, he collides with Emi on Wednesday and his first run with her is on Thursday, just before the "Cold War" between Shizune and Lilly where this story starts.
You're right, I was off by a day.

Well, for the sake of the story, I need to push all of the canon events BACK one day, so everything ...

It can't be a Tuesday. Your first day was Thursday.
Since it is not yet Sunday, it has to be either Friday or Saturday...
Got to reread the first chapters to see how many days have passed since chapter 1.
Also, if it were the Tuesday before the festival, Hisao wouldn't have run with Emi at all yet ...

I fully understand your potential to make your work public, we've all been there at some point. :)

Good plotting so far. And it's mostly well-written, if a bit... bland? No Emi taunts during the run, no wisecracks from Nurse. Also you're writing with OCs as main characters so you have to make ...

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Only major thing that bugged me, as for the story really found it interesting. What is wrong with her? I kept myself asking every page. Look forward to finding out! Your avatar is cool too, keep on writing and enjoying yourself on this forum.

"I got your feelz" brotherhood ...

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Chapter Three - Routine
Waiting for class to begin, I don't think I've ever been this early before. Even so, I'm not prepared for class either way since I never got around to finding out who has my backpack or what I missed in class on Saturday. The first part, as it turns out ...

Interesting start so far.
A few missing words here and there but nothing major.
I assume this is going to be the day Hisao arrives at the school?
The first two chapters took place during the second month of the school year, most of the way through May since school starts in April in Japan. Hisao ...

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Chapter Two - First Steps
A few students are running on the track, others, including Ryouta, are timing them while they run laps and sprints, and some are practicing for other track and field events. Watching them is suddenly kind of intimidating now that I'm thinking about ...

I've read quite a few of the stories here after first playing through the game last fall but never made an account to post anything. Although I thought about it a few times I felt that I didn't have anything to contribute. I decided to try to write something since I enjoyed reading many of the ...