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Mirage_GSM wrote: I feel like this chapter is not as...polished as the first one.
Nothing really wrong with it, though - just a gut feeling.
Still like it, though.

Likely, since I went to sleep pretty much right after posting it so any proof-reading I did was tired proof-reading.

Gonna go ahead and post this one right on the forum rather than linking it to google docs. Still not 100% on what I'll use.

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Chapter 1: Escort Mission Gone Wrong

It had been nearly a week and Hisao was still feeling lost with all the new names and faces. Some people he was seeing on a daily ...

Cute story. Misha's thought process seemed a bit off, but Rin's dialog did seem rather true to her character.

I usually prefer to read stories here in the forums, but since this is quite short, I thought I'd give it a try.

Hmm, alright. I'll experiment a bit with both before sticking to one. I'm sure I can find a way around the formatting, what I was really trying to avoid was the thing a sticky thread ...

Hey everyone. I'm a new user on the forum but I've lurked for a little while. I've been writing for years and recently played through Katawa Shoujo and really enjoyed the characters it fleshed out and the setting it gave, so I've decided to do a bit of writing in this universe.

This won't exactly ...