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Erm i think you reposted act 2 scene 7 instead of what you intented to post.
I dont completly understand

This had a lot of potential shame to see it gone, i think it just needed more time 44 chapters in 4 days seems like a massive amount. Also the constructive feedback people provide ( (*kuch* mirage ) and more) is here to help you become a better writer just like dewelar said. I think if you had given ...

I was looking for this but couldnt find it, then after like 4 pages i gave up and thought it was gone. Now i see that it is stickied and it is on top of the page call me crazy but i missed that atleast ten times... Well now atleast i know where it is, i just thought i'd mention it. Also good job ...

Not sure if it's ok to bump like this but I'll do it anyway. Don't bump for the sake of bumping, man. If you want to bring a topic back, have something to say about it. What are your thoughts on the story? I was just commenting so it'll be easier to find once I have time to read it. One picture ...

Aww, i am on a phone so my response wont be all to long.
its a nice story for sure even though shizune is a bit OOC, i really do like the writing.
Its btw Shichan. (I think)

Blasphemy wrote: Anyways, I'm starting to speculate an awful lot :/

Thats half the fun for me.
I really do like this fic as i have stated in the past i am really bad at commenting. (partly because of my terrible english)
So thanks for writing this fic

Just catched up on all of it. (3 weeks of time)
I am not someone who is great at commenting so i will just say good job.

i am impressed you was even able to write while being drunk

I didnt really notice the drop in quallity tbh, i liked every chapter so far so i dont really have any critisism.

i kind of expected a lilly phone call or even a lilly POV i guess i was right about one thing, part of the fun is guessing what will happen in the future chapters.

Good luck and hopefully you get well soon
(i like the route)

Is there anyway to find the chapters quicker instead of clicking next everytime btw?

love it

After chapter 10 i expected a lilly perspective. I still like the way you write with diffrent perspective's and it also is cool that i have absolutely no clue what will happen in this fic. I do have some theory's in my head that makes it kind of like a game seeing if i am right yes or no. ---- I ...

You my friend have the best timing for me the 2nd time this day just when i woke up and just when i came home lol gonna read it now

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I felt it coming this was pretty akward reading but for some reason i was smiling all the way trough it.

Best possible time for me ;D

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Great as always.