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Story Progress Notification*

Sorry for not being able to post much of the story in the time I have been on this forum and sadly that is unlikely to change. As the years go by I find myself having less and less time to sit down and write, least of all having the drive to write. Which is a shame as I ...

Act 2: Out of Shadows
Scene 7: When Sea Birds Fly

A few weeks laze past since Yuuto and Miki have officially started dating, which doesn’t really amount to much considering everyone’s been relatively busy studying for exams. All of us are eagerly anticipating Tanabata, more so as a break from the ...

A Little Taste of Nori


Tlink

The sound of the metal bat colliding with the ball rings throughout the field like a firework in the night. The team stops what they’re doing and watches as the ball soars across the sky, their eyes intently fixed on its trajectory. A loud metal crash followed by the ...

Took a lot longer than I expected, but I'm finally happy enough to release it. I hope you all enjoy!
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Act 2: Out of Shadows
Scene 6: Stand up to the Feet of Giants

I wince as I rub my forearm gently, groping at the bruise hidden underneath the bandage. My ...

Edible_Funk wrote:Hooray more Kirino! Really enjoying the story so far, looking forward to seeing where it goes.

Thanks buddy, good to hear! Appreciate you reading!

Loving the story so far my man. Keep it up!

Thank you very much, that means a lot to me! I'm glad to hear you're enjoying it! :D

As always thank you Mirage for the help with editing and the opinion, it certainly has helped improve this story from what it was. The next chapter is currently ...

Act 2: Out of Shadows
Scene 5: Squinted Eyes in Curiosity


The winged vermin continues to stare at me, tilting its feathered head towards me, as if I were the one polluting the city it calls home. Its orange eyes stare at me unblinkingly— a fact that I find most disturbing. The flying rodent cooes ...

Brilliant, not what I was expecting, that's for sure!

Act 2:
Scene 4: Not sure whether I’m going forwards or backwards

Do you ever wonder how you got yourself into certain situations? As if you were merely watching your life unfold before your eyes then suddenly the reins are thrust into your sweaty palms and your first thought is ‘What the hell’? I ...

Great chapter!
Two or three typos but nothing worth mentioning. Your writing has come a long way since you began this story!
Thanks a lot! I'm glad that you've read all the chapters I continually put out, it means a lot and the help is certainly appreciated. :D

So it looks pretty good, except ...

Act 2: Out of Shadows
Scene 3: Sweet Drops

Would have liked to update earlier, but work has been giving me some really weird shifts and has made it hard to edit and write. Hope you all enjoy the newest scene, I ceratinly enjoyed returning to Yamaku even if it was briefly.

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You're the first person to respond positively to anything I've done outside of the Broken Heart thread. You don't know how much this encourages me.

I'm glad that you feel that way, sorry about the fact that nobody has responded positively to more of your stuff. Just continue to do what you like ...

Holy Shit ... :shock:

I enjoyed that more than I expected to, to be honest. I had a feeling about Hisao when he was first introduced, but wondered if maybe I was being too sceptical and dark. Regardless I'm glad to have read that, it's...humbling...maybe. Makes you think about yourself in a ...

My parents have washed my hands of me long ago(Chapter 1)
I think you mean to say they washed their hands of me

He might even worse than that(Chapter 2)
I think you're missing a word in there

Why is it that whenever I read your work, It reminds me so much of a haiku or other forms of poetry ...

Nice chapter, though personally I think there is only a very limited reason to write dream scenes, and this once felt unnecessary and too long for me.
Might just be my personal preference, though.

Haha, no, no I understand. I usually hate dream sequences myself, but I always liked the cryptic ...