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A bit short, but very illuminating. Hitomi wasn't the only one not getting the references either!

Short Version: It's a good story. Long Version: I'm not going to point out any spelling or grammatical errors, enough other people have mentioned it that I'm sure you know about them. Hitomi is an interesting main character, though I had a bit of difficulty getting a read on her at first. In the fir...

a cheerful looking girl with hair a shade of pink rarely seen in nature "rarely"? :lol: “It was nice to meet you Kenchan!” By now it's probably inevitable that in fanfiction Misha uses the chan-suffix for absolutely everybody even if she doesn't do that in the VN^^° Otherwise decent chapt...

“Your going to be late.” I glanced at my mother from across the backseat of the taxi that we had caught at the train station. A small amused smile played across my lips at her words. “I'm already late,” I pointed out. She scowled, “You could at least try acting a little concerned.” I shrugged, “Work...

Fun fact; getting shot isn't anything like it is in the movies. In the movies when the hero gets shot, he grimaces, bleeds a little bit, and then keeps on going. Maybe he'll stop long enough to slap on a quick field dressing, but he's ready to go again in minutes, and by the end of the movie he'll b...

Homophones are The Enemy: Man I hate those. I've always had trouble with the whole, there, their, they're, thing. Thanks for pointing that out. I have no explanation for how I put down, "Whole," instead of, "Hole," guess I wasn't paying enough attention. With that out of the way...

Well, here I go. I used to write fan fiction quite a bit, but this habit has declined in recent years. After playing Katawa Shoujo, I felt compelled to write again, if for no other reason than to get the idea out of my head. I would just like to say that I appreciate feedback, good or bad. I also fe...