When I saw the 'unusual closeness' premise of the first story, I expected some kink-filled NursexEmi fapfiction. I didn't really expect what I got... I don't know what to say.
I don't really see the point of your haiku though. Disturbing for the sake of disturbing? There's not really much plot to ...
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- Wed Nov 13, 2013 1:22 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Eat my shorts. Stories that is.
- Replies: 6
- Views: 5027
- Mon Oct 14, 2013 6:35 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
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Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Interlude 2 up 10/14]
Clearly, Hisao has realised his folly of pursuing the svelte Emi or the reticent Hanako, and now favours the third option of Yoshiro. He loves them blind students.
In all seriousness, it will be interesting to see how you introduce and use this new character. I wasn't expecting more cast members in ...
In all seriousness, it will be interesting to see how you introduce and use this new character. I wasn't expecting more cast members in ...
- Wed Oct 02, 2013 11:36 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 829240
Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 18 up 10/2
Very nice!
I thought that the whole scene with Emi was going to lead up to an impulsive kissing/confession scene, especially after what Emi said. Almost relieved that it wasn't, because it means we can wait on more of your wonderful story.
That part with the pillow made me laugh aloud too. Perfect ...
I thought that the whole scene with Emi was going to lead up to an impulsive kissing/confession scene, especially after what Emi said. Almost relieved that it wasn't, because it means we can wait on more of your wonderful story.
That part with the pillow made me laugh aloud too. Perfect ...
- Sun Sep 22, 2013 5:40 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 829240
Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 16 up 9/22
The latest chapter is my favourite so far. That ending was excellent, if heartwrenching.
The buildup so far has been very enjoyable, but now that we move further along the path of the story I begin to worry. I almost don't want to know how this story is going to end, because someone is going to get ...
The buildup so far has been very enjoyable, but now that we move further along the path of the story I begin to worry. I almost don't want to know how this story is going to end, because someone is going to get ...