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This was fantastic. and terrible in the best way possible. I...... “Hisao,” read the single inscription on the stone, and Rin mouthed his name silently. The only other decoration on the stone were two intertwined Dandelions painted beneath the name, their flowering, yellow heads facing each other. ...

Miki's curse gets people hurt? She would be infamously known as "She-Who-Must-Not-Have-a-Route"
and again G.W.S(Get Well Soon)

-Is 2011 really 5 years after they met? Personally, I can't remember, but you may want to double-check this. I also could just be mis-understanding the current date. 2011 isn't, 2012 is. I specified dates so people would not get confused and think of something like "KS' timeline is on 2007, th...

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Quick update, I fractured my radial bone in my left arm. Therefore, typing entirely with my right arm is monotonous and very slow. Due to this development, I will not be updating this thread (at least not frequently, I am still writing) for the next two to three weeks. Once I can actually move my a...

@mirage_GSM I stated it as miracle basically it won't be called magic, due to the fact that it only involves a couple of miraculous recoveries, it has a spoiler tag due to it involving Kenji and his unknown partner.

TacticalBacon wrote:One of the best things i read all week! good job!

thanks! i'm at the university right now, i'll try to add a new chapter when i get home later.. lol

As I promised, here it is: [b][url="http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=9037"]Rebirth[/url][/b]–Epilogue by [b]Hanako Nakai[/b](ongoing, word count pending) [b]PoV:[/b]Hanako, [spoiler]occasional Hisao Moments[/spoiler]; [b]Pairings:[/b]Hisao x Hanako,[spoiler]Kenji x ????[/spoiler...

And again, thanks Mirage_GSM for proof reading my work again :D believe it or not, this story is actually already written inside my mind.. I just happen to struggle with words which I can express on my native language that sadly has no translations in english :/ therefore, whatever I'm actually doin...

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Helbereth wrote:Great Wall of Text

Hmm.. Let's see, i'll try out your advice, and will try to make a new layout on this fic. thanks for the advice Helbereth-san

For a first fan fic, I think you did pretty well. If you're planning on continuing (which it sounds like you are), then I think it has potential to turn into a great story line. Also, I get the feeling that you're "telling" the story, rather than "showing" it. By "showing&q...

First off, I actually enjoyed this. The first fan fiction is always the hardest one, you constantly worry people won't like it and end up scrapping it and trying again. Either way, welcome to writing, it's pretty fun here! Now, regarding the bold text, I get the feeling that Hanako is still very in...

the answer know is definitely yes Do you mean "the answer now is definitely yes" or am i wrong? Aaaanywho, pretty well written. That's all i could think of saying, really, since it's a fairly short fic. Subscribed to the thread just in case you're planning to make a whole series out of th...

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