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- Sat Oct 26, 2013 1:32 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
- Replies: 237
- Views: 126524
Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout
Lurked for a bit when you first posted the fic. I like where it's going! Alas, I never really have any constructive criticism (true for all fics I read here)- I read for entertainment and small errors dont bug me 'cuz I correct them myself while reading. If I'm entertained and like where the fic is,...
- Sat Oct 12, 2013 1:46 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku (Updated 1/2/14)
- Replies: 217
- Views: 89035
Re: Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku fics (Updated 6/3/13)
Saw the email for the update on this a bit ago and I'm glad you decided to continue this fic! I had to reread it (not a complaint :) ) since I hadn't really read it since before I created my account, but it was worth it! I always liked this fic, was like the second or third one I began reading when ...
- Fri Sep 27, 2013 12:52 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 755602
Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 17 up 9/26
Another well written and entertaining chapter! The POV snaking things around really does keep the future in a shroud of mystery- a good thing for this fic. Keep up the great work, dude
- Thu Sep 19, 2013 1:26 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 755602
Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 15 up 9/18
Well then. This should be interesting
- Mon Sep 09, 2013 12:27 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 755602
Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 13 up 9/8]
Noticed the few changes (stylistic mostly, as you said), but still conveying the same points and things. Looking forward to the continuation of this fic!
- Wed Sep 04, 2013 9:17 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 755602
Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 12 up 9/4]
I've grown really tired of stories which have a predictable end That's what's nice about this fic. You just cant tell where it's going to go. The only thing that we do know is that there will be a fork of sorts in the road soon, but not too soon. Everything in between is still up in the air, making...
- Mon Sep 02, 2013 8:52 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Waiting (Chapter Ten, 7/15)
- Replies: 72
- Views: 34447
Re: Waiting (Chapter Five, 9/2)
Loved the dialogue here (always been a fan of back and forth sarcasm). One thing I noticed- "She does. First time she saw me...gave me a look." Do you mean "me... she gave me a look"? I'm no grammar nazi/English aficionado, but it seemed off to me when I read it the first time. A...
- Sat Aug 31, 2013 5:01 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: He Didn't Listen - Oneshot [Part 2 Added: 29/8/13]
- Replies: 19
- Views: 9546
Re: He Didn't Listen - Oneshot [Part 2 Added: 29/8/13]
The first chapter was a new and interesting take on how Hisao gains some insight into the problem and left the rest to the imagination. That was good. I'm pretty certain that further chapters won't make the story as a whole any better. Very true. However, the second part here looks like there will ...
- Sat Aug 31, 2013 4:49 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Zombies - Updated 17/12/13
- Replies: 80
- Views: 27196
Re: Zombies
This couldnt have been more ironically timed (I'm an HvZ player at my university and we had a minigame today on one of the quads). This will definitely be interesting and worth following.
- Wed Aug 28, 2013 4:14 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
- Replies: 268
- Views: 100930
Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Agreed. Had a blast reading, Hoitash. Onto your next work! We'll all be waiting!! (No pressure )Maradar wrote:I don't know whether to be happy because it's a good finish, or sad because it's over.. Anyways well written
- Mon Aug 26, 2013 1:31 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Broken String Symphony
- Replies: 14
- Views: 7435
Re: Broken String Symphony
Sooo... I take it the bullet was more dangerous to take out than risk problems later...? Yeah, imagine having to explain why a patient is paralyzed because you accidentally nicked their spine. Probably in court lol Of course, the real reason is for dramatic plot happenings later ;) That could be an...
- Sun Aug 25, 2013 7:59 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: For my Sister (Akira/Lilly fic, in progress)
- Replies: 11
- Views: 7165
Re: For my Sister (Akira/Lilly fic, in progress)
Interest = piqued. Going to keep an eye on this one
- Sun Aug 25, 2013 1:47 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
- Replies: 496
- Views: 379042
Re: The great fan fiction archive
I am using the format, for the most part, sometimes however they don't fall under the category of "Epilogue, Route, Prequel". I was under the impression all fanfics were worth mentioning, so I've been indiscriminately tagging everything. Using the format is nice, but listing every fic can...
- Wed Aug 21, 2013 5:08 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Summer By The Sea [A sorta-sequel to Weekend at Hisao's]
- Replies: 70
- Views: 65352
Re: Summer By The Sea [A sorta-sequel to Weekend at Hisao's]
I liked Weekend, so this'll be good
- Tue Aug 20, 2013 12:00 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Waiting (Chapter Ten, 7/15)
- Replies: 72
- Views: 34447
Re: Waiting (Chapter Three, 8/16)
Just because nobody is saying anything doesnt mean that nobody is reading (awkward phrasing is awkward). I've been quietly keeping an eye on and enjoying this ficGuestimate wrote:Well, since you haven't had many comments, and I don't want you to get discouraged... erm... [insert encouraging message here}.
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