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- Mon Oct 28, 2013 9:11 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
- Replies: 107
- Views: 46688
Re: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
This gives the Hanako/Lilly route +3 at Lunch Evolution Theory. (+2 is what's needed to unlock one of the two +1s after Lunch Evolution Theory needed to get on their routes, but we're trying NOT to get on their routes here, but rather make Hanako believe in friends other than Lilly being a thing. T...
- Mon Oct 28, 2013 2:09 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 778206
Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 21 up 10/26]
Given the way Hisao acts at times, is the lucky girl the one that ends up with him or the one that doesn't....Solistor wrote:Adorable story, can't wait to see who ends up being the lucky girl.
- Sun Oct 27, 2013 6:20 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
- Replies: 107
- Views: 46688
Re: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
Actually, even within the drabble it's left open-ended. All Lilly says is that she's not keeping it. While I can definitely see Lilly's parents wanting her to have an abortion (which would fit well with Akira's view of them wanting to keep up appearances), I can't see Lilly agreeing. Lots of opport...
- Sun Oct 27, 2013 11:46 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
- Replies: 378
- Views: 197070
Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 28/09/2013)
Lilly's problem is the fact that her motherly tendencies get overbearing sometimes and that she tends to worry a bit too much about others, which sends the wrong message to Hanako, but she doesn't look down on her friend. (no matter what Hanako believes during times of emotional duress) Also, IMHO,...
- Sun Oct 27, 2013 11:30 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: DRILLER
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2600
Re: DRILLER
Between the Vespa at the beginning and the laugh at the end, now I'm imaging Misha as Haruko Haruhara as voiced by Vincent Price.
Thanks. Thanks Alot.
Thanks. Thanks Alot.
- Sat Oct 26, 2013 6:48 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 778206
Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 21 up 10/26]
To bad it's not closer to April 1st, or you put up a chapter where Hisao uses Rin (or Kenji) as a sounding board.
On the serious side, there's nothing I can say but two paws up.
On the serious side, there's nothing I can say but two paws up.
- Sat Oct 26, 2013 3:49 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Revenge and Ice Cream (A Misha & Rin One Shot)
- Replies: 11
- Views: 9218
Re: Revenge and Ice Cream (A Misha & Rin One Shot)
Thank you. I got a bit more fluff in mind, assuming I can get them out from underneath all of the allergens I'm suffering from right now.
*sneeze*
*sneeze*
- Wed Oct 23, 2013 5:54 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
- Replies: 107
- Views: 46688
Re: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
I believe that is the [hypothetical] homeroom teacher for the blind class.TheGoatman wrote:I feel like I may have failed KS with this question - but who is Miyagi?
The title and text of this one implies an Act 1 Bad End...
- Sat Oct 19, 2013 11:02 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
- Replies: 107
- Views: 46688
Re: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
I don't think she would go the mother bear route. However, I could see Lilly succumbing to parental pressure to remain in Scotland without resolving things with Hisao and Hanako (especially if she feels that she's the one that messed up.) From that point, I could imagine that it would go "not h...
- Sat Oct 19, 2013 8:24 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
- Replies: 107
- Views: 46688
Re: bhtooefr's one-shot and drabble thread
I like this. I have thought as well that in Hanako's bad-end route, Lilly would choose to stay with her parents. Also, given her nature of avoiding conflict, she would probably wear a false smile right until the end.
- Wed Oct 16, 2013 8:31 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Breaking Shoujo: The Meth Route *Updated 8/7/14*
- Replies: 53
- Views: 29500
Re: Breaking Shoujo: The Meth Route
FWIW, you could through in the tuition for the private boarding school into that bill. Then again, if the premise of the story is that Hisao's parents are throwing him to the wolves (so to speak), who knows what's actually in that ¥80,000,000...
- Tue Oct 15, 2013 7:26 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Rin: Osmosis
- Replies: 29
- Views: 14065
Re: Rin: Osmosis
Loved it! Need more rocket trips to Planet Rin!
On the technical side, I think I spotted a few grammar and spelling errors in the text. However, nothing screamed "HEY! I'M AN ERROR!!!!".
On the technical side, I think I spotted a few grammar and spelling errors in the text. However, nothing screamed "HEY! I'M AN ERROR!!!!".
- Sat Sep 07, 2013 8:54 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
- Replies: 191
- Views: 100741
Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update: 08/09/2013]
Shouldn't that be "She wants me to sit next to her?"... She wants me to sit next to here? ...
Anyway, nice update!
- Thu Sep 05, 2013 8:27 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Capture the moment (Hisao/OC) Chapter 3 posted 5/9/13
- Replies: 32
- Views: 12349
Re: Capture the moment (Hisao/OC) Chapter 3 posted 5/9/13
Liked the story so far.
Looked through the last chapter, and I didn't notice any glaring errors. However, if you would like, I could feed it through the proofing tools I use for my technical writing and see what they cough up.
Looked through the last chapter, and I didn't notice any glaring errors. However, if you would like, I could feed it through the proofing tools I use for my technical writing and see what they cough up.
- Mon Sep 02, 2013 4:27 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Zombies - Updated 17/12/13
- Replies: 80
- Views: 28087
Re: Zombies - Updated 02/09/13
I ran you story through a text editing program I use for work, and came up with the following: 10 * I recoil back from his outstretched hand "Whoa, take that thing away from me! I might accidently get injured or something." * I recoil back from his outstretched hand "Whoa, take that t...