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- Tue Feb 18, 2014 10:46 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 765899
Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 34 up 2/
But then, they're family. That makes a difference. We only PLAYED at being family. Premonition of a Lilly/Hanako BAD END? I find it interesting that Hanako wanted to defend Emi. That, and other things, leads me to believe that (at least subconsciously) Hanako realizes that Emi is treating her as an...
- Thu Feb 13, 2014 6:51 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 765899
Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Interlude 3, 2/1
They could publish an exposé on the secret life of Rin, confusing half of the student body while puzzling the other half.
But yeah, Ooe's attitude toward journalism works well for a major city newspaper -- a school publication, not so much.
But yeah, Ooe's attitude toward journalism works well for a major city newspaper -- a school publication, not so much.
- Thu Feb 13, 2014 6:39 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Forever Dreaming
- Replies: 25
- Views: 9507
Re: Forever Dreaming
Why not simply rename your character? That's easy enough for you to do. And while you're at it, you can make her Japanese - except if you want to make her insufficient language skills a plot point... You know that would actually be an interesting thing to do, but I don't think it will be easy... He...
- Mon Feb 10, 2014 9:48 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Bad Hanako (Pt5, 20/2)
- Replies: 46
- Views: 21305
Re: Bad Hanako (Pt4, 10/2)
Well, one way to win the generic VN protagonist in a harem route is to kill off all the competition ... I guess. ![Shocked :shock:](./images/smilies/icon_eek.gif)
![Shocked :shock:](./images/smilies/icon_eek.gif)
- Sat Feb 08, 2014 10:58 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Overdrive (Lilly)
- Replies: 29
- Views: 19786
Re: Overdrive (Lilly)
Also, I'll note that forced kissing is actually considered indecent assault in Japan, and it is considered sexual assault or a variation on such a crime (such as indecent assault) in many other jurisdictions. So, yeah, even by Japanese standards, what Hisao did was fucked up. I'm not surprised that...
- Sat Feb 08, 2014 9:46 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Overdrive (Lilly)
- Replies: 29
- Views: 19786
Re: Overdrive (Lilly)
Usually they'd phrase it in a more polite way, e.g. "That's a bit inconvenient right now." That was basically the point of the those articles I mentioned. (That and certain other intricacies of the language. It's a bit fascinating to a speaker coming from an area where being blunt is a vi...
- Sat Feb 08, 2014 9:06 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Overdrive (Lilly)
- Replies: 29
- Views: 19786
Re: Overdrive (Lilly)
This strikes me as a Emi Bad End overlapping with the start of a Lilly route. I imagine that in this continuity, Hisao -- consciously or unconsciously -- has perhaps grown weary of Emi's emotional distance (as did her previous boyfriend). Thus, the train wreck we saw here. About chapter 4, I was rem...
- Thu Feb 06, 2014 6:33 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
- Replies: 80
- Views: 39662
Re: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 9 2014-02-06)
Lets make the assumption that this ends up a Hisao/Hanako official couple. If so, they really need to make Akira both best man and maiden of honor at their wedding. She deserves nothing less after the assist she's given this relationship. EDIT: I'm also happy that Hanako has enough self respect not ...
- Sun Feb 02, 2014 2:21 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
- Replies: 80
- Views: 39662
Re: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 7 2014-02-02)
“Maybe w-we c-could build a n-new bridge? M-meet me halfway.” So, they're going to meet 137 miles off the coast of Los Angeles? :wink: On a more serious note... I think short chapters, used properly (as in this case) offer some some advantages to longer ones. They allow for easy timeskips, as bhtoo...
- Fri Jan 31, 2014 9:27 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
- Replies: 80
- Views: 39662
Re: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 5 2014-01-31)
...I think he doesn't even realize that he’s throwing something good away, chasing after something that doesn't exist... Ah. Something that happens all to often in real life as well as fan fiction. I'll also toss out a suggestion that Hisao here may be afraid to "fish or cut bait", as the...
- Thu Jan 30, 2014 9:16 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
- Replies: 80
- Views: 39662
Re: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 4 2014-01-30)
I'm enjoying the hell out of this one. And not just because of the song references. (Yes, I'm a Rush fan as well.)
- Mon Jan 27, 2014 3:06 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
- Replies: 80
- Views: 39662
Re: Enjoy The Silence
Interesting start. I wonder if they'll be singing Depeche Mode at Karaoke? ![Wink :wink:](./images/smilies/icon_wink.gif)
![Wink :wink:](./images/smilies/icon_wink.gif)
- Sun Jan 26, 2014 10:08 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
- Replies: 237
- Views: 128540
Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout
At the risk of being called a copycat, I'm going to ditto OutofBlues comments on this post.
But I will add that I like Hisao's response: "I knew what I was getting into." Yeah, right. Sure you did. So did Napoleon when he invaded Russia.
But I will add that I like Hisao's response: "I knew what I was getting into." Yeah, right. Sure you did. So did Napoleon when he invaded Russia.
- Mon Jan 20, 2014 10:06 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
- Replies: 237
- Views: 128540
Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout
Shizune's eyes gleam at this, her grin twisting into a smirk as she looks at me with a keen gaze. [Is that so?] she asks. [It made a difference. I am impressed. We'll have to play more often, it's even more interesting tahn the first time we played.] The "tahn" should be "than"....
- Sat Jan 18, 2014 1:42 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
- Replies: 585
- Views: 522782
Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 1/18)
The scary part is, joke post or not, it is in character for Kenji.BlackWaltzTheThird wrote:TL;DR: Hisao rooting Misha is canon, Kenji KO-ing Misha is a joke post.