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by Oscar Wildecat
Tue Feb 18, 2014 10:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1562
Views: 765899

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 34 up 2/

But then, they're family. That makes a difference. We only PLAYED at being family. Premonition of a Lilly/Hanako BAD END? I find it interesting that Hanako wanted to defend Emi. That, and other things, leads me to believe that (at least subconsciously) Hanako realizes that Emi is treating her as an...
by Oscar Wildecat
Thu Feb 13, 2014 6:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1562
Views: 765899

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Interlude 3, 2/1

They could publish an exposé on the secret life of Rin, confusing half of the student body while puzzling the other half.

But yeah, Ooe's attitude toward journalism works well for a major city newspaper -- a school publication, not so much.
by Oscar Wildecat
Thu Feb 13, 2014 6:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Forever Dreaming
Replies: 25
Views: 9507

Re: Forever Dreaming

Why not simply rename your character? That's easy enough for you to do. And while you're at it, you can make her Japanese - except if you want to make her insufficient language skills a plot point... You know that would actually be an interesting thing to do, but I don't think it will be easy... He...
by Oscar Wildecat
Mon Feb 10, 2014 9:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bad Hanako (Pt5, 20/2)
Replies: 46
Views: 21305

Re: Bad Hanako (Pt4, 10/2)

Well, one way to win the generic VN protagonist in a harem route is to kill off all the competition ... I guess. :shock:
by Oscar Wildecat
Sat Feb 08, 2014 10:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Overdrive (Lilly)
Replies: 29
Views: 19786

Re: Overdrive (Lilly)

Also, I'll note that forced kissing is actually considered indecent assault in Japan, and it is considered sexual assault or a variation on such a crime (such as indecent assault) in many other jurisdictions. So, yeah, even by Japanese standards, what Hisao did was fucked up. I'm not surprised that...
by Oscar Wildecat
Sat Feb 08, 2014 9:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Overdrive (Lilly)
Replies: 29
Views: 19786

Re: Overdrive (Lilly)

Usually they'd phrase it in a more polite way, e.g. "That's a bit inconvenient right now." That was basically the point of the those articles I mentioned. (That and certain other intricacies of the language. It's a bit fascinating to a speaker coming from an area where being blunt is a vi...
by Oscar Wildecat
Sat Feb 08, 2014 9:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Overdrive (Lilly)
Replies: 29
Views: 19786

Re: Overdrive (Lilly)

This strikes me as a Emi Bad End overlapping with the start of a Lilly route. I imagine that in this continuity, Hisao -- consciously or unconsciously -- has perhaps grown weary of Emi's emotional distance (as did her previous boyfriend). Thus, the train wreck we saw here. About chapter 4, I was rem...
by Oscar Wildecat
Thu Feb 06, 2014 6:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
Replies: 80
Views: 39662

Re: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 9 2014-02-06)

Lets make the assumption that this ends up a Hisao/Hanako official couple. If so, they really need to make Akira both best man and maiden of honor at their wedding. She deserves nothing less after the assist she's given this relationship. EDIT: I'm also happy that Hanako has enough self respect not ...
by Oscar Wildecat
Sun Feb 02, 2014 2:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
Replies: 80
Views: 39662

Re: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 7 2014-02-02)

“Maybe w-we c-could build a n-new bridge? M-meet me halfway.” So, they're going to meet 137 miles off the coast of Los Angeles? :wink: On a more serious note... I think short chapters, used properly (as in this case) offer some some advantages to longer ones. They allow for easy timeskips, as bhtoo...
by Oscar Wildecat
Fri Jan 31, 2014 9:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
Replies: 80
Views: 39662

Re: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 5 2014-01-31)

...I think he doesn't even realize that he’s throwing something good away, chasing after something that doesn't exist... Ah. Something that happens all to often in real life as well as fan fiction. I'll also toss out a suggestion that Hisao here may be afraid to "fish or cut bait", as the...
by Oscar Wildecat
Thu Jan 30, 2014 9:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
Replies: 80
Views: 39662

Re: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 4 2014-01-30)

I'm enjoying the hell out of this one. And not just because of the song references. (Yes, I'm a Rush fan as well.)
by Oscar Wildecat
Mon Jan 27, 2014 3:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
Replies: 80
Views: 39662

Re: Enjoy The Silence

Interesting start. I wonder if they'll be singing Depeche Mode at Karaoke? :wink:
by Oscar Wildecat
Sun Jan 26, 2014 10:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
Replies: 237
Views: 128540

Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout

At the risk of being called a copycat, I'm going to ditto OutofBlues comments on this post.

But I will add that I like Hisao's response: "I knew what I was getting into." Yeah, right. Sure you did. So did Napoleon when he invaded Russia.
by Oscar Wildecat
Mon Jan 20, 2014 10:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
Replies: 237
Views: 128540

Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout

Shizune's eyes gleam at this, her grin twisting into a smirk as she looks at me with a keen gaze. [Is that so?] she asks. [It made a difference. I am impressed. We'll have to play more often, it's even more interesting tahn the first time we played.] The "tahn" should be "than"....
by Oscar Wildecat
Sat Jan 18, 2014 1:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 585
Views: 522782

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 1/18)

BlackWaltzTheThird wrote:TL;DR: Hisao rooting Misha is canon, Kenji KO-ing Misha is a joke post.
The scary part is, joke post or not, it is in character for Kenji.