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- Mon Jun 23, 2014 9:18 pm
- Forum: Fan Works
- Topic: Limits of Fanfiction - What is appropriate?
- Replies: 140
- Views: 61102
Re: Limits of Fanfiction - What is appropriate?
The reason why I don't like the Misstep BEFFs even when Hanako is the initiator is because wanting Hisao back in her life is a very stupid, very self-destructive behavior, and frankly I don't think her opinion of herself is so low that she would ever try to speak to him again. And, frankly, if she ...
- Mon Jun 23, 2014 6:51 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 957652
Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: The most suprising thing)
Hanako basically fell in love with Shizune because "Oh, wow, she saved me! I do believe I'm getting a case of the vapors!" Hanako O'Hara? Hisao Butler? Anyway... I liked The Most Surprising Thing , on the whole. While it fails the "test of time", in that the full-release invalid...
- Sun Jun 22, 2014 7:29 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Clarity. A Rin Epilogue (Chapter 2 now up)
- Replies: 13
- Views: 5850
Re: Clarity. A Rin Epilogue (Chapter 2 now up)
I haven't taken the opportunity to comment on how much I like this work, yet so let me do so now: I like this work. "I agree. We should get some food. Maybe we will see Emi, we can tell her that I'm your girlfriend now. But maybe she won't be there, if she still wants to be a pirate. She might ...
- Sun Jun 22, 2014 12:50 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: After the Dream—Natsume's Arc (Complete)
- Replies: 47
- Views: 65508
Re: After the Dream—Natsume's Arc (Part 5b up 20140622)
On the other hand, I've been enjoying it. Of course, it's probably because I've been corrupted by mom's taste in Korean political dramas...brythain wrote:Well, I'm sure you (and dewelar) are quite right to dislike this part of the mosaic. The good news is that you're not the only ones.
- Sun Jun 22, 2014 11:20 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: After the Dream—Natsume's Arc (Complete)
- Replies: 47
- Views: 65508
Re: After the Dream—Natsume's Arc (Part 5b up 20140622)
Given the premise behind the existence of Yamaku in this continuity, this revelation comes a little shock to me. However, what I'm left wondering is -- if it's apparent function of Yamaku is to educate and protect the disabled children of these Families and their associates, what about Hisao? Is he ...
- Sat Jun 21, 2014 11:52 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
- Replies: 124
- Views: 60297
Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier [One Shot: 3/25]
Are Naomi and Natsume my very own torture demons sent to destroy me? I hope not. Miki would be upset someone was taking her job. I laughed quite a bit at this. That had me laughing as well. But Shizune's room? What's that like? I'm assuming she has a sword to slice off the heads of her enemies just...
- Sat Jun 21, 2014 11:41 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
- Replies: 1207
- Views: 1189196
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/18)
Beautiful update. I continue to be impressed with your interpretation of Saki. One question: “Thank you for the offer, but sadly, I don't think that would work” Lilly giggles. “What we could really use is some more of our classmates that said they would be here. Mr. Miyagi went off to try to find th...
- Sun Jun 15, 2014 6:14 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 957652
Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Victory Day)
It was a fun little story, though gods, I don't know how Hisao managed to bed all those girls. It's the sweatervest. Chicks dig the sweatervest. :wink: Anyway, as others have said, this story is what it is. I enjoyed it for the Kenji x Shizune action. (Which is not too bad of a crack pairing. I mea...
- Tue Jun 10, 2014 8:29 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 766160
Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 43 up 6/
This chapter was pure unadulterated awesome!!!
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It was an interesting new perspective, and I collected a few new people that week, but I still never got a good look at the Boy Who Lives Across From Hisao's pants.
- Tue Jun 10, 2014 6:17 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: After the Dream—Natsume's Arc (Complete)
- Replies: 47
- Views: 65508
Re: After the Dream—Natsume's Arc (Part 2 up 20140610)
Don't worry, Natsume. When I first heard of the book, I thought it had something to do with dessert...The Life of Pi, which I’d thought had something to do with mathematics.
- Mon Jun 09, 2014 9:31 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 957652
Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Can you open your heart?)
I thought it was a good story and felt Rika was a strong memorable character. It's just that the good ending felt forced. Rika simply turned around and became a better person too quickly. I would be generous and say that the good ending felt rushed rather than forced. But, that's just me. However, ...
- Wed Jun 04, 2014 11:21 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: After the Dream—Shizune/Hideaki's Arcs (Complete)
- Replies: 87
- Views: 106151
Re: After the Dream—Shizune's Arc/Hideaki's Arc (Complete)
Have I mentioned that I loved the Arcs of the "side" characters (who in the AtD-verse feel more main-characterish than the main characters) the best. If I haven't, the I've been negligent in my duty as a reader. By the way, you'll need to reprimand Hideaki and Hanako a bit here. It seems t...
- Wed Jun 04, 2014 10:13 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 766160
Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 42 up 6/
"You probably shouldn't tell her that," Rin says, turning back to her scroll. "She doesn't like people doing that for her. That's what I do. Not tell her." "I know. That's why she's...not talking to Hisao either, I think." When I say this, Rin's head quickly pivots tow...
- Fri May 09, 2014 8:33 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 957652
Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: After the Dream: Rin's St
On the tech: This device was just approved for sale, so in 20, 30, 45 years? Who knows what's possible. On Rin/Miki: Given what we know of her from the VN, there is no real basis to pair Miki with any girl. Yet, we seen plenty of Miki and Suzu, Miki and Molly, and even a Miki and Akira (I think) flo...
- Wed May 07, 2014 9:34 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
- Replies: 1562
- Views: 766160
Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 40 up 5/
It seems that, sometimes, the harder someone tries not to hurt anyone, the more likely they'll end up hurting everyone...including themselves.I've been trying as hard as I can not to take this conversation in a direction that will hurt anyone...