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by jimfinley
Fri Jul 19, 2013 11:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bizarrer and Surrealier (Inside Hanako's head)
Replies: 11
Views: 7009

Re: Bizarrer and Surrealier (Inside Hanako's head)

The idea that Hanako would WANT to talk to a complete stranger right after meeting him was a bit hard to swallow. Personally, I thought she'd have to warm up to him a bit more, but for what your story was, it was pretty entertaining. J was trying to get across that she didn't actually want to do it...
by jimfinley
Fri Jul 19, 2013 10:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bizarrer and Surrealier (Inside Hanako's head)
Replies: 11
Views: 7009

Re: Bizarrer and Surrealier (Inside Hanako's head)

RedRover wrote:
jimfinley wrote: Thinking about doing another one, thoughts?
YES.

That is all.
AntonSlavik020 wrote:I say yes. Loved it.
Well, alright then. Back to the drawing board. Probably going to be another Hanako.
by jimfinley
Fri Jul 19, 2013 9:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bizarrer and Surrealier (Inside Hanako's head)
Replies: 11
Views: 7009

Re: Bizarrer and Surrealier (Inside Hanako's head)

Glad you guys liked it. When I was writing, it seemed kinda fluffy and superficial. After a couple rereads, it seems to carry at least a little emotional weight. Thinking about doing another one, thoughts? Feedback helps. Thanks for reading, though.
by jimfinley
Fri Jul 19, 2013 8:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bizarrer and Surrealier (Inside Hanako's head)
Replies: 11
Views: 7009

Bizarrer and Surrealier (Inside Hanako's head)

You might think of it as a bonus scene to the original story. Maybe a piece of something more? I really don't know. Yet. 1.1- changed some of my retardese into English ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------...