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I'm sorry I have to be the one to say this, but this isn't good. That's not to say you can't improve, because you can, just not by doing this. Please don't take this personally, because I know it can be hard dealing with harsh constructive criticism for the first time. I'm going to list your major ...

oh yes, Numb... errm, comments on already-written fics would be good; comments on yet-to-be-written fics are difficult because, well, no text for discussion. Sorry! Oh, right, yeah. Totally didn't forget the name of this thread for a while there. I have yet to read the listed fics, I'll try to get ...

While I have yet to write something exploring the idea more eloquently, I have what I find to be an interesting view on Jigoro as a character. A lot of it boils down to Jigoro being a victim of injustice at the hands of the Satou family, and his attempts to fix the problem through less-than-legal ...

I guess I'll poke my head in for the general Shizune discussion (I haven't read the listed fics recently enough to comment on them). Shizune to me is a very interesting character, though not because of the characteristics directly displayed in the Katawa Shoujo canon. Shizune as a character can be ...

Blossom is aborted at 36,110 words. The last update was actually 2014-04-01. I'd put it into the code format and make things easier for you, but I can't see the template anywhere.

Oddball wrote:Natsume only wears socks when she sleeps. It's not a sexual thing, it's just how she's most comfortable. Also her feet get cold easily.

Not sure if this means sleeping nude with socks on or not wearing socks during the day. Both are interesting ideas though.

On the topic of Leaty and the ever-elusive Iwanako route, consider reading this post . At the risk of going somewhat off-topic for a moment, Leaty raises a lot of good points in that post. I'd say I agree with 99% of what she said, the only thing I would disagree with is the ending remark that ...

If you're having trouble writing a character when you first start out, try writing a full history for them. Example: I'm currently working on a new project and struggled to get a solid grasp on what kind of character I want the romantic focus to be, so I've made a new document with details from ...

I figure I might as well say it here now that this thread is back in main view. This isn't dead, it's just untouched as of right now. I recently left BCube for reasons I'll probably go into in another post over on their forums, which freed up some of my ideas for written work. However, I'm currently ...

True, though I honestly felt that it never meaningfully expanded on Shizune's character. Some conjecture can be made given what we see of Jigoro, but it just didn't really go in depth. Speaking of whom, seems more like a walking meme than a nuanced character. All in all, it just felt like a wasted ...

Best one yet, I r8 it 8/8 m8

How have I not posted here yet? You captured my interest a while ago, but this update has gotten me hooked. I'd post some log wall of praise, by I'm on my phone and the typing isn't exactly the best. All I can say without blabbering on and getting annoyed at the keyboard that doesn't register my key ...

Munch, that is fucking genius

Another thing about Miki... why has it become fanon that she's friends with Suzu? Canonically , she "tends to get on better with guys", to the point that she doesn't even talk to Emi, her teammate , much. Because they sit next to each other in class. :) I always thought it was a case of opposites ...

"No friends?" Astute observation, Miki. She bends down slightly, her This is in the first chapter, just saw this today. Her what? It just ends off, I'm going to assume it's something to do with cleavage, or would've been but you cut it out. Suddenly, I notice Shizune re's eyeing me maliciously ...