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- Fri Sep 13, 2013 4:17 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
- Replies: 191
- Views: 98690
Re: Blossom - Chapter Three: Switching Tracks [Part Two]
I spent a little extra time on this one trying to get the nurses dialogue right. Sorry for the delay, here it is! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------...
- Tue Sep 10, 2013 4:11 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
- Replies: 191
- Views: 98690
Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update: 09/09/2013]
I already have the pills in my room anyway, so it isn’t a problem . I know where you mean anyway, so it isn’t a problem . I suggest rephrasing that to avoid the repetition. “God Hisao, you are so dense. I was trying to say I need to see the nurse anyway, so we can go together. Can’t you pick up on ...
- Tue Sep 10, 2013 3:31 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
- Replies: 191
- Views: 98690
Re: Blossom - Chapter Three: Switching Tracks [Part One]
Again, this chapter is getting long, so I have made a rough average for how many words I post per update. Most of these should have around 1500 words, some obviously will go over this limit, some under, but who cares. Anyway, on to the story :D -------------------------------------------------------...
- Mon Sep 09, 2013 6:39 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
- Replies: 191
- Views: 98690
Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update: 09/09/2013]
Medication or not, even if Suzu ways just a light 40kg that's still a lot of extra weight in absolute regards. And if I'm not mistaken his shape is absolute shit at that point, I wouldn't expect him to do well for even just 2-3 minutes carrying Suzu. I mean I guess it's kinda not really an importan...
- Mon Sep 09, 2013 3:30 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
- Replies: 191
- Views: 98690
Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update: 09/09/2013]
I'm having a bit of trouble picturing them spending five to six hours in the Shanghai and then about three or four hours wandering lost through the town... It's a small town and Yamaku is on a hill - a hill that Hisao got winded climbng in the VN even without having to carry Suzu^^° Apart from thes...
- Mon Sep 09, 2013 1:46 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
- Replies: 191
- Views: 98690
Re: Blossom - Chapter Two: The Shanghai [Part Two]
Sorry for the slight delay in the release of this chapter. I had to start it from scratch after running into some complications, but I think this turned out much better than the last one. As usual, feedback welcome and all that jazz. Now, on to the story! :D -----------------------------------------...
- Mon Sep 09, 2013 12:43 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
- Replies: 191
- Views: 98690
Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update: 08/09/2013]
Well, this shaping up nicely. And hilariously :). Good work and good luck with the curse. I recommend an exorcism involving the use of fanart and a map of the Ryukyu Islands, but that's me. Thank you! I am currently on an inspiration streak, and rewriting my notes. The plot from now will hopefully ...
- Sun Sep 08, 2013 12:04 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: The "feels" bazaar.
- Replies: 2254
- Views: 608517
Re: What's going on..
I won't say you will be able to forget Katawa Shoujo, it has a massive impact on people, it would be incredibly difficult to forget these feels. I will say this though; the community here all suffered the same thing after reading it. We know what it's like to go through the KS Depression, some of us...
- Sun Sep 08, 2013 11:32 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
- Replies: 191
- Views: 98690
Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update: 08/09/2013]
SO far it seems like it might be interesting. We'll see where it goes. Not certain how much I like Hisao casually referring to Miki's "stump," though. I'd imagine him trying to tactfully avoid mentioning (even internally) her lack of a hand. However... WARNING: NARCOLEPSY-RELATED RANT INC...
- Sat Sep 07, 2013 7:28 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
- Replies: 191
- Views: 98690
Re: Blossom - Act One, Chapter Two: The Shanghai [Part One]
[I have decided to ditch the music cues. I realised it breaks immersion in the story and adds irritating complexity to setting the scene. Sorry to those who liked the concept <3] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------...
- Sat Sep 07, 2013 5:24 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
- Replies: 191
- Views: 98690
Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [First Chapter 07/09/2013]
Thanks for the blessing. I am currently taking a short break from typing chapter two (It's a long one, might need to split it), I can feel my hands starting to give outReq wrote:nice, another Miki route. I hope you can break the curse, good luck.
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- Sat Sep 07, 2013 4:07 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Birthday gifts for the cast
- Replies: 146
- Views: 44435
Birthday gifts for the cast
Sorry if a thread like this exists already, I did minimal searching because I need to get back to writing my Miki route (Second chapter might be up later tonight). So recently some friends and I had a discussion on Skype concerning what we would give each girl for their birthday. The suggestions wer...
- Sat Sep 07, 2013 5:59 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
- Replies: 191
- Views: 98690
Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [First Chapter 07/09/2013]
Pretty good. But it seems a bit... rushed I guess? I can't really point it out. Maybe I'm just used to drawn-out descriptions everywhere... Yes, I feel the same way. I started writing this at about 10PM last night, but kept scrapping it until I was happy with it, but by that point it was nearly 1AM...
- Fri Sep 06, 2013 8:04 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
- Replies: 191
- Views: 98690
Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
So, I decided that even if I think I will fall victim to the Miki curse, I will post my attempt at her route. I will be writing the next chapter straight after this goes up, but I might not update the thread straight away. I have wanted to do a pseudo-route ever since finishing the game a month and ...
- Wed Aug 28, 2013 12:14 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: How is KS similar to your life?
- Replies: 86
- Views: 34133
Re: How is KS similar to your life?
Well, first off I have a disability (Congenital Insensitivity to Pain), and second, I have had an experience similar to Rin. My creative writing shocked my teacher when he saw it, and he tried to force me into writing teams, short story competitions and a bunch of other crap I was never interested i...