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by Numb
Fri Sep 13, 2013 4:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 98690

Re: Blossom - Chapter Three: Switching Tracks [Part Two]

I spent a little extra time on this one trying to get the nurses dialogue right. Sorry for the delay, here it is! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------...
by Numb
Tue Sep 10, 2013 4:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 98690

Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update: 09/09/2013]

I already have the pills in my room anyway, so it isn’t a problem . I know where you mean anyway, so it isn’t a problem . I suggest rephrasing that to avoid the repetition. “God Hisao, you are so dense. I was trying to say I need to see the nurse anyway, so we can go together. Can’t you pick up on ...
by Numb
Tue Sep 10, 2013 3:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 98690

Re: Blossom - Chapter Three: Switching Tracks [Part One]

Again, this chapter is getting long, so I have made a rough average for how many words I post per update. Most of these should have around 1500 words, some obviously will go over this limit, some under, but who cares. Anyway, on to the story :D -------------------------------------------------------...
by Numb
Mon Sep 09, 2013 6:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 98690

Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update: 09/09/2013]

Medication or not, even if Suzu ways just a light 40kg that's still a lot of extra weight in absolute regards. And if I'm not mistaken his shape is absolute shit at that point, I wouldn't expect him to do well for even just 2-3 minutes carrying Suzu. I mean I guess it's kinda not really an importan...
by Numb
Mon Sep 09, 2013 3:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 98690

Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update: 09/09/2013]

I'm having a bit of trouble picturing them spending five to six hours in the Shanghai and then about three or four hours wandering lost through the town... It's a small town and Yamaku is on a hill - a hill that Hisao got winded climbng in the VN even without having to carry Suzu^^° Apart from thes...
by Numb
Mon Sep 09, 2013 1:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 98690

Re: Blossom - Chapter Two: The Shanghai [Part Two]

Sorry for the slight delay in the release of this chapter. I had to start it from scratch after running into some complications, but I think this turned out much better than the last one. As usual, feedback welcome and all that jazz. Now, on to the story! :D -----------------------------------------...
by Numb
Mon Sep 09, 2013 12:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 98690

Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update: 08/09/2013]

Well, this shaping up nicely. And hilariously :). Good work and good luck with the curse. I recommend an exorcism involving the use of fanart and a map of the Ryukyu Islands, but that's me. Thank you! I am currently on an inspiration streak, and rewriting my notes. The plot from now will hopefully ...
by Numb
Sun Sep 08, 2013 12:04 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The "feels" bazaar.
Replies: 2254
Views: 608517

Re: What's going on..

I won't say you will be able to forget Katawa Shoujo, it has a massive impact on people, it would be incredibly difficult to forget these feels. I will say this though; the community here all suffered the same thing after reading it. We know what it's like to go through the KS Depression, some of us...
by Numb
Sun Sep 08, 2013 11:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 98690

Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update: 08/09/2013]

SO far it seems like it might be interesting. We'll see where it goes. Not certain how much I like Hisao casually referring to Miki's "stump," though. I'd imagine him trying to tactfully avoid mentioning (even internally) her lack of a hand. However... WARNING: NARCOLEPSY-RELATED RANT INC...
by Numb
Sat Sep 07, 2013 7:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 98690

Re: Blossom - Act One, Chapter Two: The Shanghai [Part One]

[I have decided to ditch the music cues. I realised it breaks immersion in the story and adds irritating complexity to setting the scene. Sorry to those who liked the concept <3] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------...
by Numb
Sat Sep 07, 2013 5:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 98690

Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [First Chapter 07/09/2013]

Req wrote:nice, another Miki route. I hope you can break the curse, good luck.
Thanks for the blessing. I am currently taking a short break from typing chapter two (It's a long one, might need to split it), I can feel my hands starting to give out :lol:
by Numb
Sat Sep 07, 2013 4:07 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Birthday gifts for the cast
Replies: 146
Views: 44435

Birthday gifts for the cast

Sorry if a thread like this exists already, I did minimal searching because I need to get back to writing my Miki route (Second chapter might be up later tonight). So recently some friends and I had a discussion on Skype concerning what we would give each girl for their birthday. The suggestions wer...
by Numb
Sat Sep 07, 2013 5:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 98690

Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [First Chapter 07/09/2013]

Pretty good. But it seems a bit... rushed I guess? I can't really point it out. Maybe I'm just used to drawn-out descriptions everywhere... Yes, I feel the same way. I started writing this at about 10PM last night, but kept scrapping it until I was happy with it, but by that point it was nearly 1AM...
by Numb
Fri Sep 06, 2013 8:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 98690

Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]

So, I decided that even if I think I will fall victim to the Miki curse, I will post my attempt at her route. I will be writing the next chapter straight after this goes up, but I might not update the thread straight away. I have wanted to do a pseudo-route ever since finishing the game a month and ...
by Numb
Wed Aug 28, 2013 12:14 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: How is KS similar to your life?
Replies: 86
Views: 34133

Re: How is KS similar to your life?

Well, first off I have a disability (Congenital Insensitivity to Pain), and second, I have had an experience similar to Rin. My creative writing shocked my teacher when he saw it, and he tried to force me into writing teams, short story competitions and a bunch of other crap I was never interested i...