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by Numb
Thu Oct 03, 2013 5:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 98684

Re: Blossom - Chapter Seven: Running Late [Part Two]

The festival approaches! Sorry if the ending to this chapter seems a little rushed, I was pressed for time and really wanted to finish this block. It seems fine when I read it, but reading your own work is always different :lol: -----------------------------------------------------------------------...
by Numb
Thu Oct 03, 2013 1:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 98684

Re: Blossom - Chapter Seven: Running Late [Part One]

Dont know if you're looking for Grammar Nazis/Spelling Spetznaz, but practice. Sorry to be a pain. I'm alright with corrections being pointed out. I've been training myself to use the correct form of "practice/practise" lately, it's one of those things I have always hated. Anyway, fixed :...
by Numb
Mon Sep 30, 2013 12:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 98684

Re: Blossom - Chapter Seven: Running Late [Part One]

The process for this one was a little bit rocky, I deleted and rewrote the entire thing probably seven or eight times before coming to this draft. As always, enjoy! :D ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------...
by Numb
Mon Sep 30, 2013 2:56 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: How'd you find yourself here?
Replies: 914
Views: 305828

Re: How'd you find yourself here?

Millbeeful's let's "play" (I guess is the correct word?), got bored waiting for thirty minutes of story every night and ended up downloading and finishing the game myself. Of course, once one has read Emi's path over fifteen times they realise they have an obsession, then I turned to the ...
by Numb
Sun Sep 29, 2013 7:17 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: How'd you find yourself here?
Replies: 914
Views: 305828

Re: How'd you find yourself here?

Millbeeful's let's "play" (I guess is the correct word?), got bored waiting for thirty minutes of story every night and ended up downloading and finishing the game myself. Of course, once one has read Emi's path over fifteen times they realise they have an obsession, then I turned to the f...
by Numb
Sun Sep 29, 2013 6:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: -
Replies: 50
Views: 20888

Re: _

Kind of disappointed to see this abandoned so soon, but I can see your reasoning. You don't feel ready to write a long project like this yet. That's perfectly fine, try one-shots until you are more confident in your abilities, it's a big project writing a route or epilogue with multiple chapters. He...
by Numb
Sun Sep 29, 2013 10:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 98684

Re: Blossom - Chapter Six: Faculty Favours

This chapter is short, mainly because of my screw-up with the timeline. I managed to figure out a way to fit two chapters into the last day before the festival though, so I'm fine with this :D -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------...
by Numb
Sat Sep 28, 2013 5:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 98684

Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update: 25/09/2013]

Just going to say now, the next chapter hasn't even been started yet. I've had a fairly busy weekend, the main thing being hitting 100 subscribers on YouTube. I promise you all this, I will never let this die. To prevail as a writer, one has to break free from short stories, and if I can't finish my...
by Numb
Sat Sep 28, 2013 6:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 98684

Re: Blossom - Chapter Four: Cityscape [Part Two]

“Oh, right, I forget not everyone knows about it. Basically I can’t feel pain or temperature. I see what you did there, before i even read on :twisted: No idea what you mean :roll: Honestly, the only reason he has the same condition I do is because I couldn't think if anything else for a disabled r...
by Numb
Thu Sep 26, 2013 1:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 98684

Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update: 25/09/2013]

Well, for the sake of the story, I need to push all of the canon events BACK one day, so everything lines up. I just worked it out now, I should be writing the festival chapter right now, as it has now reached Sunday. I still had two chapters in mind before the festival, so imagine Hisao transferred...
by Numb
Wed Sep 25, 2013 2:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 98684

Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update: 25/09/2013]

[Meet Misha and I for lunch tomorrow... "Misha and me" I'm still confused about the timeline... Which day is it currently? Corrections made, and this chapter occurs on a Tuesday I think. I keep having to refer back to chapter three and the "I Hate Mondays" mug, then reading thro...
by Numb
Wed Sep 25, 2013 12:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 98684

Re: Blossom -Chapter Five: Trinity [Part Three]

This one is shorter, but I feel like trying to extend it to meet my usual post size would ruin it. Hopefully you all enjoy it :D ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------...
by Numb
Sun Sep 22, 2013 4:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 98684

Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update: 22/09/2013]

Fc360 wrote:So Hisao goes for a run, gets all sweaty and hot and doesn't go for a shower or get dressed? lol
I completely forgot about that, I will need to write that in the next part of the chapter :lol:

EDIT: I forgot again. He has one in the morning next chapter though :lol:
by Numb
Sun Sep 22, 2013 3:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 98684

Re: Blossom - Chapter Five: Trinity [Part Two]

Looks like this is going to be a three-parter. Enjoy :D ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------...
by Numb
Sun Sep 22, 2013 2:53 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Music that makes you think of KS
Replies: 811
Views: 277694

Re: Music that makes you think of KS

I actually think of Rin whenever I hear this and imagine an actual date scene with her having that in place of Red Velvet. It seems to me like it fits her style better, considering the syncopated rhythm matches her somewhat syncopated thoughts and personality. I actually listen to it on endless loop...