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All the yes! Great first chapter, looking forward to a continuation if it's still to come

A great story and a short read. Bravo good sir/maddam. You've made a truly great story with excellent detail

Dam glad to see this story back. And another great chapter!

Another great chapter my friend. I love the back and forth dialogue and parents crude joke at the beginning. Also i dont remember exactly where, but i noticed a missing closing bracket. Just throwing that out there

You have my attention... I like this

I love this story. Looking forward to the continuation

I like it. Would be nice to see it continue from there

Great one shot, though to be honest, the "fatal" thing bothers me too

Glad to see this fic return! If you're looking for edits, you put face instead of fact in the second full paragraph. If you weren't looking for them, well too bad, you got one.

Wow. Such story. So suspense. Much feelings. I like

WHY CAN'T I WRITE LIKE A PRO LIKE YOU?! Great chapter good sir/maddam. I eagerly await the next installment!

Sex would be boring, Sex is never boring! Now as for the story... It's great. I'm digging the way it's progressing, and how you're adding a little wrinkle in their ever-smoothing life. I look forward to the next chapter. I understand you're not much for writing sex scenes, but lets face it, sex is ...

And here i was worrying this was a forgotten thread.. Glad to see another chapter

Thanks for the feedback. Now i know what to look out for better. Negative criticism good, tells me what i need to fix. As far as Noami and Natsume being so forward, I think of it as their character. I see Naomi is being sort of like Akira. Both personality and looks (though i have nothing to do with ...

I find this lack of feedback disturbing