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Finally all caught up. I feel like Act 4 so far has done a good job of capturing that limbo state between graduating high school and doing anything else. Can't wait to see how it all falls apart!

I fall into deaths cold embrace and spiral into the darkness, blissfully dreaming as my legs are flattened like pancakes. You describe things in jarring ways quite a bit, but this line takes the cake. There are too many contrasting adjectives through the whole sequence. This line is another example ...

-Hisao seems to have realized a crush on her pretty quickly. Slow it down friend, it's better to take things like that slow so they're believable. Well In my experiences, crushes can happen rather quickly. They can sometimes, but if this is the case, there should be more of a "Damn..." factor, if ...

Thanks for the support, guys. Scene IV will be out in the near future. Nice chapter. You know I'll always take quality over quantity. Everyone always says this, but two months is still unacceptable. "Hold up! One more thing!" She runs back into the bathroom and I hear the small spritz of a perfume ...

I royally fricken goofed, guys. I told you that the next chapter would be out soon a month ago, and I'm still not fully done with Scene IV. The was intended to be a part of IV, but I decided that I needed to put SOMETHING out to remind you guys that I'm not dead. This can be considered a trailer ...

We'll find out more about why next chapter. :wink: S-someday, right...? Anyway I really enjoyed this :mrgreen: Bumping because I've seen quite a few fanfic authors on several forums quit when there wasn't much replies or encouragement. Oh my, I've hit the one month mark. I promised earlier that I ...

Hmm... no complaints about the chapter per se, but... Why does every Rika have to have such suicidal tendencies? And why do they have to drag Hisao down with them? ^^° Think of her as that one friend you had in high school that would always get you to do stupid and dangerous things. It isn't ...

ProfAllister wrote:

RedRover wrote:Pork!? The best flavor of instant ramen!? LIES! Chicken is the best! CHICKEN I SAY!!!

Otherwise, fantastic chapter.

Relax. No one believes something as absurd as that. It's another example of the author emphasising just how stupid Hisao is.

Right fools you are, the both of you!

--------------------------------------------------------- Scene III: A Slice of Life --------------------------------------------------------- "You're telling me that you've been here for three weeks, and you still haven't been to the town?" Alex asks. "No," I answer plainly. This is actually only ...

Genderbending is an interesting topic, and I have yet to read any fanfics that have it.This particular snippet is too short to tell anything about the story, but you've piqued my interest. My one complaint however is the script format. While it looks easy and simpler to write, it's actually very ...

UPDATE: I will not be releasing a new chapter tomorrow. One week isn't cutting it for this chapter, so I'll be raising the time between chapters to two weeks. Hopefully with twice the time, I can put out more well executed, higher quality chapters.

Another strong chapter. I can start seeing where some conflict can arise, but it's too early in the story for us (the audience) to see if that's what the major plot line is going to focus on. Keep 'em coming. The main conflict is coming, just you wait. You may or may not notice when it does arrive ...

I'm really enjoying reading this, and I really can't wait to see more. And don't worry, I'll try not to bug you about grammar. Maybe a little Please do bug me about my grammar; I'm always looking to improve. --------------------------------------------------------------- It's technically Saturday ...

We've only known each other for three days, but somehow it just felt... right? We've only spent a total of two days together, and yet we were essentially cuddling last night. It feels... off. So... Which is it? :lol: Both. Like the others said, Hisao isn't really sure himself. I suspect the other ...

This was a difficult chapter for me to write, so I apologize for the delay. I really don't like the way it turned out, but I couldn't just scrap it. The next chapter will be much better, I promise. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Scene I ...