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by CheezeXI
Tue Sep 03, 2013 8:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki Psuedo Route [Updated 6/21/13]
Replies: 68
Views: 28246

Re: Miki Psuedo Route [Updated 6/21/13]

I promise I haven't forgotten or abandoned this. I'm trying a few different writing techniques, and it's taking quite a bit longer than anticipated. I'll post another update soon. Thanks man. Just remember DON'T STOP...BELIEVING. Hold on to that feeeeeeeling But really, appreciate your work sso far...
by CheezeXI
Mon Sep 02, 2013 7:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki Psuedo Route [Updated 6/21/13]
Replies: 68
Views: 28246

Re: Miki Psuedo Route [Updated 6/21/13]

Hello, as a fan of fanfics and a fan of life, I would like to know if something has delayed you immensley or if you jave forgotten about this.ni understand you may have very important things to do, but would appreciate an update on your writting. But please, do what needs to be done first, I love a ...
by CheezeXI
Mon Jun 24, 2013 9:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki Psuedo Route [Updated 6/21/13]
Replies: 68
Views: 28246

Re: Miki Psuedo Route [Updated 6/21/13]

Very good. I'm not much of a critic, so I'll only he able to say that the worst part was the end, where I realized that ther was no more. I like the way you did the flashbacks and the stay at the hospital, but I do think that you should have written Hisao's thoughts on who the girl could be. Unless ...