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Sea wrote:Actually, I think I've got a thing for this

O_o Flippin 'eck...
I'd say add some sort of warning, but I guess that, given the thread we're in...

As I finished reading this, I actually raised both arms into the air, yelling "YESSS!!! IT HAS BEGUN!!!" Needless to say, I'm loving your work so far. Hanako is OOC Actually, the way the scene with the door played out, Hanako was far more believable than I expected her to be. Well played, ...

Running so far today has been a lot harder than yesterday, presumably because yesterday I had the benefit of being well-rested, not to mention that carrying Hisao seems to have been more of a workout for my legs than I had expected. As I come around the next bend, however, I see that my running for ...

I fiddle with my pen, trying my best to turn it between my fingers. I’ve only managed to get it through one or two rotations so far, but I’ve only been trying for a little bit. My efforts will have to wait, however, as the bell rings, and everyone gets up to go to lunch. So much for paying attention...

>Impact< So much for a good night’s sleep. It sucks, really, that the one time I actually feel committed to getting some rest, my phantom pains keep me up. But it’s not like I have control over it, so here I am, out in the middle of the night again. As I round the nearest corner, snaking my way aro...

It's that time of week again! Some parts of this scene were the best things I've ever written (you may or may not pick up on a few), and some definitely weren't (though hopefully you won't pick up on those :P). All in all, there was enough chunky, delicious text to hit 4k words, which was a nice fee...

Liking part 3, there were a few minor spelling mistakes that I don't have time to mention in whole at the moment, but otherwise, it's developing well!

Write on, my good man!

Loved reading through this, your story has a nice flow to it so far, and I'm enjoying a lot of little details that I hadn't quite considered at first. Best of luck with your writing, I know the feeling of being completely unable to get things done (and thinking that I suck) far too well myself, but ...

So, I figured that since I'm (chronologically) right between my last post and my next post, I'd do a small update. Let's see what people said! [Miki]'s gonna end up boinking Hisao in a public place, isn't she Ha, that's funny. Still, though, as humorous as it is, I don't- Heh. I approve of this idea...

I head back to my room and try to take a nap, but only end up laying in my bed for an hour or so. It's nice to have time to myself, but after a while I feel like I'm being unproductive. I consider doing some homework, but a quick glance at the first piece of paper in my pile of unfinished work revea...

>Tossing and Turning< I quietly exit the girls’ dorms, checking left and right to make sure that there’s nobody around to see me. Not that it would matter much; with these clothes on, even I would have trouble recognizing myself. I stretch my right and then left leg for just a few seconds as my lef...

You know you're writing a good fic when people create an account just to follow it That's Vulpes, he's needed an account on here for a while now anyways. Heck, in a few days it will have been a whole year since we played KS for the first time. So last time I said that I'd have the next update out i...

Oh wow. Up until the sirens I was feeling the feel train. Then I just got confused. I was kinda the opposite, I didn't get much from the story until then (then again, I'm really tired). I'm not 100% convinced this is suicide, actually. Could well be something else, much as that would detract from t...

Numb wrote:Blossom is not dead. It is simply hospitalised, in a coma if you will.

Aww.
I'm going to miss your updates, but I completely understand your move into VN dev, it's fun times.
Best of luck, and I hope to see you around!

... also I'm 100% flattered that you mentioned my route, thanks!

I was, as usual, reluctant to start reading, for some strange reason. And, as usual, it just took a few minutes of reading to find myself really into it! The personalities you're creating look to be coming along well, and I'm genuinely interested in the story progression so far I definitely think yo...