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by Craftyatom
Mon Feb 10, 2014 9:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bad Hanako (Pt5, 20/2)
Replies: 46
Views: 21021

Re: Bad Hanako (Pt4, 10/2)

Sea wrote:Actually, I think I've got a thing for this
O_o Flippin 'eck...
I'd say add some sort of warning, but I guess that, given the thread we're in...
by Craftyatom
Mon Feb 10, 2014 5:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bad Hanako (Pt5, 20/2)
Replies: 46
Views: 21021

Re: Bad Hanako (Pt4, 10/2)

As I finished reading this, I actually raised both arms into the air, yelling "YESSS!!! IT HAS BEGUN!!!" Needless to say, I'm loving your work so far. Hanako is OOC Actually, the way the scene with the door played out, Hanako was far more believable than I expected her to be. Well played, ...
by Craftyatom
Thu Feb 06, 2014 12:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 26th, 2020)
Replies: 217
Views: 160984

Impact (3/3)

Running so far today has been a lot harder than yesterday, presumably because yesterday I had the benefit of being well-rested, not to mention that carrying Hisao seems to have been more of a workout for my legs than I had expected. As I come around the next bend, however, I see that my running for ...
by Craftyatom
Thu Feb 06, 2014 12:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 26th, 2020)
Replies: 217
Views: 160984

Impact (2/3)

I fiddle with my pen, trying my best to turn it between my fingers. I’ve only managed to get it through one or two rotations so far, but I’ve only been trying for a little bit. My efforts will have to wait, however, as the bell rings, and everyone gets up to go to lunch. So much for paying attention...
by Craftyatom
Thu Feb 06, 2014 12:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 26th, 2020)
Replies: 217
Views: 160984

Impact (1/3)

>Impact< So much for a good night’s sleep. It sucks, really, that the one time I actually feel committed to getting some rest, my phantom pains keep me up. But it’s not like I have control over it, so here I am, out in the middle of the night again. As I round the nearest corner, snaking my way aro...
by Craftyatom
Thu Feb 06, 2014 12:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 26th, 2020)
Replies: 217
Views: 160984

Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Jan 23rd)

It's that time of week again! Some parts of this scene were the best things I've ever written (you may or may not pick up on a few), and some definitely weren't (though hopefully you won't pick up on those :P). All in all, there was enough chunky, delicious text to hit 4k words, which was a nice fee...
by Craftyatom
Wed Feb 05, 2014 9:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bad Hanako (Pt5, 20/2)
Replies: 46
Views: 21021

Re: Bad Hanako (Pt3, 6/2)

Liking part 3, there were a few minor spelling mistakes that I don't have time to mention in whole at the moment, but otherwise, it's developing well!

Write on, my good man!
by Craftyatom
Fri Jan 31, 2014 2:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sun Blind (OC x Molly) - Updated February 2nd
Replies: 44
Views: 19492

Re: Sun Blind (OC x Molly) - Updated February 2nd

Loved reading through this, your story has a nice flow to it so far, and I'm enjoying a lot of little details that I hadn't quite considered at first. Best of luck with your writing, I know the feeling of being completely unable to get things done (and thinking that I suck) far too well myself, but ...
by Craftyatom
Wed Jan 29, 2014 2:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 26th, 2020)
Replies: 217
Views: 160984

Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Jan 23rd)

So, I figured that since I'm (chronologically) right between my last post and my next post, I'd do a small update. Let's see what people said! [Miki]'s gonna end up boinking Hisao in a public place, isn't she Ha, that's funny. Still, though, as humorous as it is, I don't- Heh. I approve of this idea...
by Craftyatom
Thu Jan 23, 2014 12:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 26th, 2020)
Replies: 217
Views: 160984

Tossing and Turning (2/2)

I head back to my room and try to take a nap, but only end up laying in my bed for an hour or so. It's nice to have time to myself, but after a while I feel like I'm being unproductive. I consider doing some homework, but a quick glance at the first piece of paper in my pile of unfinished work revea...
by Craftyatom
Thu Jan 23, 2014 12:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 26th, 2020)
Replies: 217
Views: 160984

Tossing and Turning (1/2)

>Tossing and Turning< I quietly exit the girls’ dorms, checking left and right to make sure that there’s nobody around to see me. Not that it would matter much; with these clothes on, even I would have trouble recognizing myself. I stretch my right and then left leg for just a few seconds as my lef...
by Craftyatom
Thu Jan 23, 2014 12:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 26th, 2020)
Replies: 217
Views: 160984

Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Jan 8th)

You know you're writing a good fic when people create an account just to follow it That's Vulpes, he's needed an account on here for a while now anyways. Heck, in a few days it will have been a whole year since we played KS for the first time. So last time I said that I'd have the next update out i...
by Craftyatom
Wed Jan 22, 2014 4:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Life Expectancy
Replies: 10
Views: 5245

Re: Life Expectancy

Oh wow. Up until the sirens I was feeling the feel train. Then I just got confused. I was kinda the opposite, I didn't get much from the story until then (then again, I'm really tired). I'm not 100% convinced this is suicide, actually. Could well be something else, much as that would detract from t...
by Craftyatom
Fri Jan 17, 2014 2:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 98669

Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]

Numb wrote:Blossom is not dead. It is simply hospitalised, in a coma if you will.
Aww.
I'm going to miss your updates, but I completely understand your move into VN dev, it's fun times.
Best of luck, and I hope to see you around!

... also I'm 100% flattered that you mentioned my route, thanks!
by Craftyatom
Fri Jan 10, 2014 11:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
Replies: 1207
Views: 1182400

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 12/9)

I was, as usual, reluctant to start reading, for some strange reason. And, as usual, it just took a few minutes of reading to find myself really into it! The personalities you're creating look to be coming along well, and I'm genuinely interested in the story progression so far I definitely think yo...