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by Craftyatom
Wed Jul 02, 2014 12:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 26th, 2020)
Replies: 217
Views: 160984

Converse Appropriation (3/3)

I didn’t manage to get that many questions done, especially since it took me a while to figure out how to actually use the information that Hisao gave me, but I did at least do a few. As everyone files out of the classroom, I make sure to stay behind a little, fiddling with my bags until Hisao walks...
by Craftyatom
Wed Jul 02, 2014 12:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 26th, 2020)
Replies: 217
Views: 160984

Converse Appropriation (2/3)

Saturday. One last day of school before Sunday. If only it didn’t have to happen so early in the morning… I walk into class and sit down, but something seems different. Normally people are pretty talkative at this point, getting in some last-minute conversation before class begins. Today, however, e...
by Craftyatom
Wed Jul 02, 2014 12:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 26th, 2020)
Replies: 217
Views: 160984

Converse Appropriation (1/3)

>Converse Appropriation< The week wears on, and I find myself rocketing around the track again, though this time Hisao is watching. He showed up pretty early today, and said that he was going to do his homework out here since it was such a nice day. I’m feeling a lot brighter today, probably becaus...
by Craftyatom
Wed Jul 02, 2014 12:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 26th, 2020)
Replies: 217
Views: 160984

Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Feb 6th)

I hope you guys are as happy to see this next update go out as I am to finally be able to write an update again, because damn if it doesn't feel good to be productive for the first time in a while. These past 5 months have been quite the adventure. Those of you who saw the edit I made to the top pos...
by Craftyatom
Mon Jun 30, 2014 9:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Not Like Him - Rin Oneshot
Replies: 6
Views: 8447

Re: Not Like Him - Rin Oneshot

I enjoyed reading this, you did a good job establishing an emotional basis. Commendations on the work. The dialogue thing is an unfortunate side effect of working on a VN, as the majority of my writing currently is done in script format. I know that feeling, I spent some time working on a VN, and wh...
by Craftyatom
Fri Jun 20, 2014 11:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
Replies: 1207
Views: 1182400

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 2/14)

A wonderful piece of work, as always. It's lovely to see these firework scenes play out, and the play between characters went really well. I take her lead, gazing up at the mostly-night sky as the last traces of sunlight flees behind the hills. Should be "trace" or "flee". I thin...
by Craftyatom
Mon May 12, 2014 11:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lustre: A Misaki Kawana Route [Update 11/05/2014]
Replies: 30
Views: 17120

Re: Lustre - Chapter One: Hisao Nakai; journalist.

“Scruffy retired?” He will be missed. Hopefully he lives out his dream of owning a beach house with that old wash bucket of his. 3.3 mol of magnesium hydroxide is almost 200g of the stuff. That's… a lot. Hey man, don't judge. Sometimes you need a lot. :P Besides, Google says that that should only c...
by Craftyatom
Thu May 08, 2014 10:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 26th, 2020)
Replies: 217
Views: 160984

Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Feb 6th)

Just discovered your route and read it all! Hope you stick to a reasonable schedule and release the next one soon! Also, since summer is coming up, will you be writing and releasing chapters at a more frequent rate? Thanks for all your work and I can't wait for the next one! :D I'm actually not sur...
by Craftyatom
Wed Apr 02, 2014 9:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bugger It, Oneshot Thread (Morse Update 10/4/16)
Replies: 161
Views: 81136

Re: Bugger It, I'll Make This A Oneshot Thread

Absolutely splendid, though there were a few technical errors, but it washed out in the laughter.
Well played.
by Craftyatom
Wed Apr 02, 2014 6:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 98669

Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]

Guestimate wrote:Uhh.... April Fools? ... Right?
Oh, the wishes.

Thanks for putting this out, and the closure. It's been fun, I had a great time reading this.
Guess I should really do some updates of my own, huh...
Feurox wrote:RIP Blossom, RIP in peace.
by Craftyatom
Sun Mar 30, 2014 12:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki's First Time
Replies: 28
Views: 13700

Re: Miki's First Time

Ansolutely wonderful... I was laughing almost the whole time in elation/surprise. Job well done!
by Craftyatom
Sat Mar 22, 2014 11:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Life Expectancy
Replies: 10
Views: 5245

Re: Life Expectancy

I probably won't write anymore KS, so, feel free to criticise and tear this thing to pieces. I kind of would welcome it, in fact. Sort of. Well prepare to be disappointed, because I quite enjoyed your way with words, especially when Hanako thinks to herself. You seem to have a knack for making a mo...
by Craftyatom
Sat Mar 22, 2014 11:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bugger It, Oneshot Thread (Morse Update 10/4/16)
Replies: 161
Views: 81136

Re: Bugger It, I'll Make This A Oneshot Thread

Munchenhausen wrote:
bhtooefr wrote:And it's canonically Lilly's mother that's Scottish...
I can dream, Harold :'(
I'll admit that I was so busy trying to remember playing CoD4 that I forgot this part. Shame on me.
by Craftyatom
Tue Mar 18, 2014 4:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 948616

Re: Yamaku Book Club

The meeting may now begin Excellent! Let's play Angel's Advocate for KS: Bloodline . If I had bothered to remember the blurb describing this story as I dug my way into the first few chapters, I would've known from the start that one of the big things to worry about going in is the SETTING . This st...
by Craftyatom
Tue Mar 18, 2014 3:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Confession Letter (Hanako)
Replies: 9
Views: 4983

Re: Confession Letter (Hanako)

Well, you can guess from other people's reactions how I reacted to this. I'm not sure that the first part fazed me as much as it should have, but the end definitely, well... wow. This also brought up another interesting idea regarding Hisao, but I suppose that that's a tad off-topic. 9/10 would feel...