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Please tell me the curse hasnt taken you too :( Nope, I've been caught up in college, which hasn't given me as much time to write as I would like, and has left me drained during a lot of the time I would've liked to be writing. The next scene is coming, I'm 2k words into it, but that still leaves 2...

Eurobeatjester wrote:Well, bad news for me, good news for the story!

Oh no! :O
Best of luck with healing that, hope you can be back on your feet soon-ish.
I will not be happy about more updates. I will not be happy about more updates. I will not be happy about more updates.

This was pretty fun to read, once I got past the beginning, where I had a few moments thinking that this would be a suicide fic. I'm glad it wasn't.

+1, good work!

Finally got around to catching up with your posts, act 2 is looking good!

Keep up the good work

I enjoy the writing style you've got going, but promote caution in terms of your tenses - you mixed past and present a bit there. Nothing major, and certainly nothing I haven't been guilty of myself, but certainly something to consider. Besides that, not many obvious mechanical errors, especially if...

Somehow I think nobody's surprised that I loved "Ascent". It had a number of wonderfully emotional moments, the overall sentiment (Hisao would die to protect Emi) was well-played, the plot seemed fairly well thought-out, the writing was brilliant (if a little typo-heavy :x ), and I persona...

Sneakily updated 10 August! It wasn't sneaky, I was just slow on updating the title. :P The entire first part feels like Hisao picked up the idiot ball, or lost about 5-10 years of life experience, though, with how much Miki had to teach him about basic things like dressing himself . Funny thing is...

By the time we finally arrive at our destination, Hisao is looking exhausted again, but I put on a giant smile and gesture to the store in front of us. “Behold: ‘Cloud Nine Ice Cream Palace’!” Hisao seems rather unimpressed with both my gestures and the grandiose nature of the store’s name. “I’m pre...

“No, see, they’re running shoes. I’m not going to waste precious shoe lifetime on just walking places.” After getting Hisao some more exercise attire, we headed to the shoe store, where I picked up a beautiful pair of running shoes. Given how much they cost, I'd very much like to keep them pristine,...

>Little Angels< It’s a fairly pleasant morning as I walk over to the bus stop. The sun is out, and without a cloud in sight, I’m fairly confident that the weather won’t change throughout the day. As I approach the bench by the bus stop, I see that Hisao is already there. I almost don’t recognize hi...

Okay, that was a little bit more than 2 weeks, but not a horrendously long time, so I consider this progress. Honestly, I had 80% of this scene done in two weeks, and then realized that I wasn't going to have it out in 2 weeks' time, at which point I found it much harder to bother... Motivation is a...

Mahorfeus wrote:More to come on the 12th, I suppose.

For the first time in a while, I can't wait! Figuratively, at least. That was bloody amazing.

I like this, it's a fun, relaxing read, and I'll be glad to see more out, so keep up the good work! Also, the line "Got something against my ass?" is the funniest thing I've seen in weeks. Regarding pacing issues, I personally didn't see/feel too much of an issue... But then again, I never...

On one hand, I'm sure that this isn't the correct place for this, unless it counts as a strange form of narrative.
On the other hand, I laughed.
On top of that, I once wrote a song parody about Misha as a creative outlet as well.

Either way, props for both your work and the decision to share it.

As much as you've probably been told this by family, friends, whoever else might worry, if you need somebody to talk to about that, I'm here. I went through two years of depression, with a three year recovery climb, so I should be able to help if you feel down again. Aaaahhhhh, depression. Fun. Lis...