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Absolutely lovely. The overall idea is obviously not tremendously new, but you certainly did it justice. Props on the work.

... That said, maybe I'm just biased because I love me some happy endings :P

Thanks, dear readers. Future dear reader reporting in, I only just got around to checking this fic out and it looks wonderful so far! There's obviously a slight depressing element, but that only adds to the story. I love where you're taking this story, and I'm glad that it's shaping up the way it i...

A change of pace relative to the first part, but then again, I doubt you could've matched it in tone. Still enjoyed it, though the pseudo-cliffhanger left me a little anticipant. consistent chess matches in the team room with Lilly. *tea I-i-if you don’t have anything planed … *planned Like a charac...

I could tell by the title of the story where things were going. The title did not tell me, however, just how far things would go. Phew. I will also admit that I was wary coming into this fic because I was kind of expecting it to flop; relatively new poster, smutty one-shot, it's kind of a recipe for...

I don’t know how to respond to that statement and her frown depends , before a ‘eureka’ moment happens. Pretty sure you mean 'deepens', or if not, then at least something other than 'depends', just saying. Disregarding that, however, this tidbit felt nice! I had to take a look back and kind of remi...

This chapter had me torn. It was full speed ahead in one direction, and somber/depressing in the other. Well done, but I personally don't stomach the dissonance well. That's my problem, though, not yours.

Things are coming together well, keep up the good work!

As people have mentioned, excellently done. I'm lucky to, like AntonSlavik, have one of the mildest forms of epilepsy, so though I've never experienced anything even near the scope of this piece, I have a general understanding of the process, the different triggers, how incredibly weird it is to wak...

Well, as long as this post is already bumped, may as well put in my good word for it. Well-written, well thought out, and made me feel the feely feels. Also only one of two routes, fan or proper, that I have ever gotten the good ending for on the first try. Good job making something I really enjoyed!

This was a spectacular read, and the premise is an exciting one to say the least. Red's character feels really well done, and isn't something I personally have heard/read before.

Props for the good work!

That wasn't menat to be a complaint about the update schedule. I just wanted to express my doubt that having a choice point in the story will work any better than in any of the few dozen stories that tried it before... Oh, my bad. Well, if it's any consolation, I'll be trying my best not to let you...

Is Miki actually thinking about her education? MADNESS Not so much actively thinking about it as allowing it to happen around her, really. Also, "Madness..." Tight focus on Miki means no other characters get a look in? I am not the best at 'lots of characters', but I am going to try to ex...

“Oh, okay. So you put the concentration of the bits on top, and the concentration of the combination on the bottom, and it always equals this number, which is different depending on which acid it is.” Hisao nods, but adds “For weak acids, yes.” “Weak acids, gotcha. How are those different again?” He...

I trot to a stop, my running for the day finished. Hisao is waiting on the side, but starts walking down to the track once he sees that I'm done. "So what do you think, am I getting faster?" He becomes uneasy, and responds with an unsure "Um... Yes?" I laugh at his rather shaky a...

>Self-Insufficient< Back to the grind, I suppose. Class today has been no different than usual, with the exception that I recognized a few of the things Mutou was saying from the quiz last week. I still didn’t get much of what he meant, but I doubt it matters. Probably. I don’t have time to mull ov...

Well, it's not quite been 2 months since the last update, and I've finally got this one out. If excuses are acceptable, it's because I've just moved into college, and am stil getting used to things. I have a lot of time to write now (including the wonderful writing hours of 3-5 in the morning), whic...