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Project Blue Curtain 1 - Timeliness I’m late. That’s why I’m desperately sprinting across campus in my pajamas: because I’m late. To be fair, since it’s warm out, my nightwear consists of shorts and a t-shirt, so it’s not like I’m running around in a onesie. Or lingerie. When I started here, they s...

It’s the 25th of December, and you know what that means! It’s time for my contribution to the S9 - and boy, was it a difficult one this year. My prompt was KS between takes - all the characters are actors; this is a chance to see them when the camera's not rolling , for ProfAllister - not a particul...

Akira's Surprise I've never read your previous fic, but I still realized what was gonna happen pretty quickly. You telegraphed it rather heavily. Not a big deal, just saying that you definitely could've gone for the element of surprise - I mean, this plot seems like a surprising one, so I was kind ...

My oh my. I was waiting for the letter to come up, but that got cleared up pretty quickly. I figured we were out of the woods, what with that out of the way. But here we are. I'm not entirely sure what I'm rooting for. I know roughly what I want to happen, but how is a bit more fluid. I see many pos...

We will now look at what I consider the most kosherbacon of all the kosherbacon stories. I definitely can't argue with this assessment. That was insane and ridiculous and hilarious the whole way through. It's an enjoyable read, because it's just so unpredictable, yet well-done; you never know what'...

Interesting read. Definitely set everything up well, and evoked the right emotions. The writing was simple, yet effective. My biggest complaint would be that it stopped where it did - it's fine to imagine what happened next, but I would've enjoyed actually having that part of the story to read. That...

A nice little piece. I would've liked a bit more detail on Hisao - it reads as though he froze in place once Shizune and Misha walked in, whereas I would expect no end to the stuttering and blushing and general discomfort from him. Still, "Hisao Boobs" and "I'm not about that life&quo...

Mirage_GSM wrote: ↑Tue Oct 16, 2018 7:38 am

since you already know about Miki and I

about Miki and me.

Thanks for the new chapter! Pleasure as always

Fixed! Thanks for the catch, and I'm glad you enjoyed!

Goodness, I've just gotten the strangest sense of deja vu... Weird. (Note: deja vu is common before and after epileptic seizures. I know from firsthand experience.) Anyways: Hikari, inukashi I can see the really good parts of this story. The main character is portrayed really well, and her (I assume...

It’s a huge relief to be done with class for the day. I mean, it’s usually a relief anyways, but especially today. The test this morning went better than expected, but it took a lot out of me, and the rest of the day was pretty much spent on autopilot. At lunch I found that Suzu felt the same - she ...

When I woke up this morning, the first thing on my mind was the test. I went over to check that Suzu was up - not only was she awake, she looked like she was ready to fight the apocalypse bare-handed. She might’ve been worried during our study sessions, but now, as we walk to class, she seems ready ...

>Uplink, Downlink< Finally, after more than an hour, our last study session before the test has come to an end. The next time we get together, it will be mere minutes before the test begins. Each of us is handling that fact differently. Hisao seems confident, which is pretty much what I’d expect. T...

Three months since the last chapter... not great, but not terrible. In that time I also did a lot of planning for the future of the story, which is something I’ve seriously neglected in the past - until now, I’ve never planned more than one or two scenes ahead. Now, however, I have a good idea what ...

Two unusual and possibly-deeper-than-they-first-seem subjects brough up by Misha in as many chapters? Interesting. Hisao's letter fit his attitude over the past two chapters, and his internal strife was a nice normal relationship worry, even if the resolution was a bit circuitous. Your writing was g...

I found this one absolutely hilarious. From the very beginning (the whole "supple body" and "thread count" metaphor), I knew it was going to be a laugh. It did get less zany as the chapters went on, which was a shame, as that was really its greatest strength, but I still found my...