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- Mon Mar 18, 2013 7:39 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako and Lilly having sex [Warning: Pure Yuri]
- Replies: 52
- Views: 21493
Re: Hanako and Lilly having sex [Warning: Pure Yuri]
If I were to suggest anything, it would be to do more reading, especially in the genre you're attempting to write. -Any Suggestions? Lushstories has ALOT of awful members that the ads seems to be much more enjoyable than the actual stories written. Literotica has an awful layout, dead interfacing a...
- Sun Mar 17, 2013 11:17 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: What arc should i try next?
- Replies: 985
- Views: 259717
Re: The Devotion Sickness
Based on the title...am i the only one who tought of a yandere galore?
Anyway, that feeling is normal, it is a proof of love
Anyway, that feeling is normal, it is a proof of love
- Sun Mar 17, 2013 11:00 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako and Lilly having sex [Warning: Pure Yuri]
- Replies: 52
- Views: 21493
Re: Hanako and Lilly having sex [Warning: Pure Yuri]
OH GOD! Thanks alot guys, Ive always wanted some REAL creative criticism. Got it, my faults are: 1. Bad grammar 2. Spelling mistakes 3. Title? LOL it was intentional, really. Ok, while I agree, there are some areas where I wanted to defend myself. While it seems to be the norm for literotica, your u...
- Sun Mar 17, 2013 6:39 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: The death of Misha... *MASSIVE SPOILERS*
- Replies: 168
- Views: 49670
Re: The death of Misha... *MASSIVE SPOILERS*
I cannot unsee it
What have I done
My very first day in the forums, and I got rape!
- Sun Mar 17, 2013 6:36 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: The death of Misha... *MASSIVE SPOILERS*
- Replies: 168
- Views: 49670
Re: The death of Misha... *MASSIVE SPOILERS*
I just skimmed through the Misha's suicide arc. And I just wanted to say...
NOOOO!!!!!
BRING ME BACK MY PURITY!!!!
BRING IT BACK I SAY!!!!!!!!!!
I WILL DO ANYTHING, ANYTHING
NOOOO!!!!!
BRING ME BACK MY PURITY!!!!
BRING IT BACK I SAY!!!!!!!!!!
I WILL DO ANYTHING, ANYTHING
- Sun Mar 17, 2013 5:23 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: The death of Misha... *MASSIVE SPOILERS*
- Replies: 168
- Views: 49670
Re: The death of Misha... *MASSIVE SPOILERS*
Really cool!
Can you give me the link? or 50 years from now, I will regret ever holding back the chance for an adventure
Can you give me the link? or 50 years from now, I will regret ever holding back the chance for an adventure
- Sun Mar 17, 2013 5:19 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako and Lilly having sex [Warning: Pure Yuri]
- Replies: 52
- Views: 21493
Re: Hanako and Lilly having sex [Warning: Pure Yuri]
DAMN! First review was about a small but tragic mistake
Anyway, im surprised you said nothing about the sex scene
Anyway, im surprised you said nothing about the sex scene
- Sun Mar 17, 2013 5:11 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: The death of Misha... *MASSIVE SPOILERS*
- Replies: 168
- Views: 49670
Re: The death of Misha... *MASSIVE SPOILERS*
I never played Shizunes arc and i dont really like Misha. But the thought of her committing suicide will turn the tide. If done correctly, it can create the most melodramatic scene for the VN and will instantly grant her the title of most memorable character. And if your lucky, maybe some fans will ...
- Sun Mar 17, 2013 2:25 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako and Lilly having sex [Warning: Pure Yuri]
- Replies: 52
- Views: 21493
Re: Hanako and Lily having sex [Warning: Pure Yuri]
AUTHORS NOTE!!! Hi yah! Katawa Shoujo Fans. This is my third erotic fanfic and I originally wrote this just so I can have a reason to visit the forums and talk to the creators of the game and now that its done, do you know how I feel? Tired….im so, so, so very drained of my energy. I mean this stor...
- Sun Mar 17, 2013 2:25 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hanako and Lilly having sex [Warning: Pure Yuri]
- Replies: 52
- Views: 21493
Hanako and Lilly having sex [Warning: Pure Yuri]
(Authors Note: Before reading, I recommend you to play some good piano music. Such as “Sono Hanabira OVA ending OST” ) As the rain showered the land in a gentle downpour, the clouds overheard rumbles a soft thunder. The heavy weather has blot out the sun, enveloping the world in a cold darkness. A ...