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Karnewarrior wrote:
To use the body armor, get shot.

Not much to say about this chapter, outside the fact I found that line very amusing.

The canteen bursts with activity, with people queuing for their lunch and others occupying the tables. Until this line I had no idea that a canteen was anything other than something to drink out of. Temporarily confused me. That said, solid chapter. Nice to this this continued at any rate, Molly do...

That was a sweet chapter. I can see the idea of not seeing Misha for about a year at least, after seeing her everyday for 3 years, would be rather upsetting for Shizune. And now that this part of the story is over with, I'm very interested to see how things pan out from here. Can't wait till she mee...

I actually had a giant smile on my face when I finished it too. I do hope Lilly and Shizune can reconcile at some point, since the source of their original issues is gone. Rather or not that's actually brought up in this story, though, is another matter. As always, Anton, thanks very much for the k...

I actually had a giant smile on my face when I finished it too. I do hope Lilly and Shizune can reconcile at some point, since the source of their original issues is gone. Rather or not that's actually brought up in this story, though, is another matter.

I have to say, very solid start. Like Leaty said, it's nice to see an introduction that's not super short and actually gives you somewhat of an idea on the story. I'll definitely be following this.

I don't have much to say about the story itself, obviously, but it's nice to see a route for a girl who doesn't get much attention. Also, loved the writing. Hisao's internal monolouge was hilarious.

I want to point out here that even if Hisao had tried this in that scenario, he would not have been received nearly as successfully. Oh, really? Interesting. Why? I figure it has something to do with the fact that Hisao, being a guy who she may or may not like at that point, would make her more ner...

Dr.Worm wrote:Machoman: Thanks for reading. I particularly enjoy writing this story for the back and forths between Yuuto and Shizune/Miki.

AntonSlavic020:

Miki wrote: "The term is assbutt."

Just out curiosity, why did you change my name? The character's name is spelled "Slavik".

sanduba wrote:commenting here so I can read later

I just click on the "view first unread post" button. It should appear if your logged in. Very convenient.

dewelar wrote:

AntonSlavik020 wrote:Hisao' s name doesn't really blend well with any of the girl's names.

I don't know...you just have to be willing to go against convention:

Emisao
Hanasao
Lisao
Rinisao
Shizusao

Eh?

Yeah, none of those really role off the tongue, though Lisao isn't bad.

I actually really like "Iwahanako". I don't know why. I think it's from people referring to the various Mass Effect pairings in the same way(Shenko, Shekarian, ect...) and Hisao' s name doesn't really blend well with any of the girl's names.

Great chapter! I don't have a whole lot to say, except that you are the master of cliff hangers. This is at least the second very good one in this story. I can't wait for the conversation between Iwanako and Lilly. I can't help but feel they will get along well.

The "odd number of heads" line was hilarious. Overall, interesting fic. Not a whole lot of ones from Rin's perspective, so that alone is a plus, even if she isn't my favorite.

Just saw this, dialogue is quite good. I especially like it because, even though I like KS, I don't particularly like Hisao as a character. Maybe my personality is weird but this guy is more likable to me. That's interesting, because until recently I found him completely unlikable. He was to much o...