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One thing I noticed is it almost seems like Lyle's putting on an act around Hisako, than just acts naturally when talking to his Haruto. Not sure if that's actually the case or not, but it seemed that way to me. Also, you said "1985" at one point. Unless there actually is a book called th...

One thing I noticed is it almost seems like Lyle's putting on an act around Hisako, than just acts naturally when talking to his Haruto. Not sure if that's actually the case or not, but it seemed that way to me. Also, you said "1985" at one point. Unless there actually is a book called th...

One thing I noticed is it almost seems like Lyle's putting on an act around Hisako, than just acts naturally when talking to his Haruto. Not sure if that's actually the case or not, but it seemed that way to me. Also, you said "1985" at one point. Unless there actually is a book called tha...

Really enjoyed the banter in this chapter, especially Hisao turning everything Shizune is saying into a euphemism.

Uhh... Well... I wasn't really planning on doing a full story... Longterm commitment isn't my forté, so I opted for a 'pick the best bits out of the carcass' approach. Taking the best bits and R63ing them, such as everyone else's introductions, Womynly Picnic, Lyle & Hanaro's tea party etc. etc...

Interesting. I find gender-bent stories interesting(love it when Adventure Time does it), so this has that going for it. As for the story itself, it didn't have any glaring errors that I noticed, except that I found your addition of a "choice" at the end rather pointless unless you plan on...

Been absent from the forums for about a week now(my birthday follows Christmas so I got plenty of stuff to distract me from here). Well now I'm back, and I'm loving this story. Great OC with a very creative disability. Plus, Molly doesn't get enough love and I do have a soft spot for yuri, so so far...

Great chapter. Really like how Shizune and Lilly have started to reconcile. It's obviously going to take a while, but I'm glad to see they're trying.

I have to say, you have my attention. Really like the Miki perspective. It's always a bonus when the story isn't from Hisao's POV.

bhtooefr wrote:I still say the bad ending is a better ending for Hanako than the neutral one.

That could very well be true. I've seen people make very good points about that before. Kinda reminds me about how Rin's neutral ending is more depressing than her bad ending.

Well, now that we have that out of the way, the good ending can finally begin. It should be great.

Aunt Shizune called? Um......how?

Great conclusion to the story. I have to admit I'm curious as to what her experiences at Yamaku will be, but that would end up being another story in and of itself, as well as being entirely unnecessary. Overall, very good story with a well done conclusion.

What a lovely chapter, I'm assuming this is the end of this story? The Shizune stories are so few and far between that I'm having a really hard time remembering which one is which, come to think of them all as part of one story lately. I actually had the same problem. It took me a bit to remember w...

I really like this. I think you succeeded in making Jiggy much easier to sympathize with, which isn't something a lot of fics do.